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Crystal Fantasy

"I never travel without my diary, one should always have something sensational to read . . .” Oscar Wilde, 1891 April 12, 2011 It happened again on April 12th My crystal dove fell off the shelf The shelf of knickknacks in my mind Of people and places, left behind This one was Adam and all we could be Lovers, partners, the possibilities The alternate dream, if you would Of another us in a parallel world Where I’m not married, nor is he And dreams of together morph into being I pick this dove up, this Adam fantasy And place it on the shelf, out of my reach Susan Burch *Won 8th place in "The Diary" contest

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Date: 1/25/2012 6:53:00 PM
I appreciate your comments to me today!
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:52:00 PM
Susan, I was looking and looking around and realized I may have seen pretty much all of your poems. Hope you are working on a new one for us! This one was very good and I'm glad to see it won that Diary contest. Congrats, my friend.
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:47:00 AM
Very imaginative and poetic write. Well done! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:41:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Susan. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:06:00 AM
Congrats Susan on your well deserved win in this contest.A beautiful elegent piece of poetry..LOve, Gautami
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Date: 4/18/2011 3:02:00 PM
Crystal Fantasy - What a apt title for this lovely entry. Many congrats on your win, susan. Lainie
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Date: 4/18/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest, susan
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:33:00 PM
Many congrats, Susan: )
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your wonderful win in The Diary contest with this superb entry luv.. enjoy your top ten sweet success ...excellent..
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan in Constance La France's contest "The Dairy". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2011 4:55:00 AM
Nice work Susan, best of luck in the contest, welcome to poetry soup, and thanks for stopping by...Raul
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:51:00 PM
Susan, a very interesting approach to write your fantasy and what a cool title for it. Good luck in this contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:44:00 PM
Enjoyed the dream and the reality, Susan
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:25:00 PM
a very masterful and creative piece of poetry. good luck in the contest. yes me to welcome to soup and hope to see a lot of your fine poetry.
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Date: 4/12/2011 2:10:00 PM
Reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...If I have not done so, welcome to soup may your stay be long with many more great works like this one..Sara
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Date: 4/12/2011 2:02:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest. Beautiful!
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:56:00 PM
Good job in doing the right thing ;) dreaming is often far better than the reality! Thanks so stopping by with all your nice comments! Light & Love
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