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 winter wears a white coat ice magnum opus wide range let yourself defrost 7/7/5 looming snow-capped peaks frozen water treks slowly sky has a somber color 5/7/7 frost flakes piling on the grass sparkling like diamonds dawn beckons with a bright smile 7/5/7 Syllables checked by HMS Written: December 08, 2022 Triple New Charlieku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 1/5/2023 10:17:00 AM
Very nicely done, Lasaad. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/4/2023 9:49:00 PM
Great winter scene. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2023 8:28:00 PM
Wonderful write, Lasaad. You did this so well with great imagery. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie
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Date: 12/10/2022 11:28:00 AM
Very lovely, Lasaad! Breathtaking images. :)
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Date: 12/9/2022 10:08:00 PM
Very Very Very Nice to charm reader. Blessings
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Date: 12/9/2022 7:45:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. I imagine it wasn't very easy to write but you did it seamlessly. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:23:00 PM
Lovely haikus... one superseding the other in beauty and loveliness ! All the Best in the contest, dear friend.
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Date: 12/8/2022 12:21:00 PM
Beautiful nature scenes in each haiku--a lovely poem, my friend.
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Date: 12/8/2022 11:24:00 AM
Monumental Haiku, dearest Lasaad. They are nature's pride. Be blessed ??
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Date: 12/8/2022 9:34:00 AM
- A beautifully described winter landscape, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 12/8/2022 9:17:00 AM
Lovely string of haiku Lasaad, I can feel the chill Best of luck in the contest. Hope you're well. Tom
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