Crying Over Spilled Women

His bleeding heart
Was flustered from that torn parchment
In their leeching chapter

Pushed aside
As if “friendship” was aggression’s bull
Running through crowded cemeteries
Under quartered, sapphire moon

He sipped pitied shots of century-old whiskey
With a dusty glass of pomegranate w(h)ine

“Why isn’t she coming back to me?”
“My heart will make empty declarations until her return!”

As he childishly latches onto recycled yesterdays
Praying for God to give him
White picket gate’s access code

Writing lavish, debt-ridden sonatas,
In whiplashed curiosity,
On why she chose to forget him

Unbeknownst to decrepit author
That he
Could simply
Return the favor

©Drake J. Eszes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 11/5/2015 9:39:00 AM
I think this is one of your best - I can't believe I hadn't read it before. I found the idea of "latching onto recycled yesterdays" particularly poignant, since I think many of us do that without realizing it. You always take us on a rollercoaster of emotion (pardon the cliché) and bring us safely to your ever-astute conclusions.
Login to Reply
Ober Avatar
Heather Ober
Date: 11/5/2015 10:15:00 AM
Yes, I am back :) Finally over the writer's block that knocked me down for awhile! I really hope you start writing again soon too!!
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/5/2015 9:52:00 AM
<3 <3 <3!!! You're back again! YAY! Yeah, we really do. I think it's just part of Human nature to do that. But, that said, some do it way more than they need to. You rock, as always, Heather. :D
Date: 2/13/2014 7:20:00 PM
WOW! very creative. I love this one. I find myself liking your writing a lot.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 2/13/2014 10:51:00 PM
Well, that's a very cool thing to see you say. I do appreciate that, Lillie. =)
Date: 12/6/2013 5:14:00 PM
Return the favor indeed! Fine flow!
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 12/6/2013 5:24:00 PM
Hi & thank you, Chuck!
Date: 12/4/2013 9:02:00 PM
Very emotional. Creative word choices,Drake.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 12/6/2013 5:24:00 PM
Hi Juliet! Thank you very much!
Date: 11/27/2013 10:23:00 AM
Wow......glad I didn't miss coming back to see this one! Phrases you use, just blow me away.......the w(h)ine factor just knocked my socks off........you are so clever, and unique in the way you think and process your feelings... What a healthy explosion of words....in almost every poem you are able to vent, cry, laugh, feel, and you take us along for the ride! Thanks for that! Happy Thanksgiving, Drake!
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/27/2013 10:35:00 AM
HI CARRIE! =D Just awesome...I am always open to your thoughts & feelings on my work. They mean so much. Thank you for that. I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving too!
Date: 11/19/2013 4:26:00 PM
Great ending...the shifting of power... too few realize it. Said like a psychology Major. Hugs and all. SuZ
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/19/2013 5:57:00 PM
Hey Suz!!!! =D Fantastic comment! Thank you so much!
Date: 11/16/2013 3:20:00 PM
why is'nt she comming back to me? my heart wil make... I have been there to that place for so many days. great write.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/19/2013 5:57:00 PM
Yes, indeed! Thank you so very much, John! =D
Date: 11/15/2013 12:38:00 PM
Those words, oh it's wonderful :) I was drawn in by your title and i was not dissapointed. You are so talented, I love reading your work. The last stanza is my favorite. Simple retaliation. I love it. Love, Juli-Michelle
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/15/2013 6:27:00 PM
Spot on with your observation, Juli! =D I had to bring it home strong. Thank you so very much!
Date: 11/14/2013 12:57:00 AM
As I thought of all the things about this poem I could comment on, they all fell short of the hug I wish I could give you. I wish you could see the look in my eyes reassuring you that for all you feel you've lost... You will one day be so overjoyed that you were denied the access code, so the "One" who will cherish the treasure of you; could have her own serendipitous entrance into your own picket fence. Loves my friend :-)
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/14/2013 6:29:00 AM
Oh my goodness...I'm just waking up and reading this extravagant comment. Holy damn. Sarai, I will say that this wasn't about me (though I used to be this way about 10 yrs ago). Your sheer reassurance in this comment is mindblowing & a deeply kind thing to say. There aren't enough characters in this box to REALLY say thank you...
Date: 11/14/2013 12:01:00 AM
It's foolish to hang onto could-have-been's and miss out on new opportunities. You've nailed this one well, Drake. Good stuff, my friend. Licia :-)
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/14/2013 6:21:00 AM
Oh, certainly! =D I couldn't agree more, Licia. Life does not give us such luxuries to wallow like that. ;-) Thanks so much!
Date: 11/13/2013 3:41:00 PM
Oh. My. Damn. That was Freaking amazing. Your Stanzas are magical
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/13/2013 4:52:00 PM
=D WOO HOO! Thank you so much, Jay. I definitely appreciate it.
Date: 11/13/2013 11:56:00 AM
Wow! You have written this so well that I can visualize it and am taken in. I agree with someone else who said that last stanza really does say it all, though getting to that realization seems to be the hardest part! Fantastic poem!
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/13/2013 12:08:00 PM
Well, hi there Tina! =) Yes, it is as difficult as we allow it to be. Thank you so much! Very cool to see you here!
Date: 11/13/2013 8:30:00 AM
Wow! This time I can't pick a stanza that leaps out more than the others. It is all brilliant. We can try to write the pages of our lives but the characters we choose to have a place of prominence don't always behave as we would like. So we can keep digging up unfulfilled memories from yesterday's cemeteries or choose to move on into tomorrow.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/13/2013 9:28:00 AM
Hey, Monterey!!! =D A very striking comment. I couldn't agree more. You rock! Thanks so much!
Date: 11/12/2013 12:32:00 PM
A crushing blow to one's ego when the one you want doesn't feel the same way. 'Access code to white pickets gate"....awesome line! Cry those tears and move on to someone who will appreciate and return your love. Brilliant write! Hugs
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/13/2013 9:23:00 AM
Yes, for sure. But, of more concern & in most cases, it's those exact egos that will break their spirit & heart. Additionally, they'll take it out on everybody else who didn't deserve it. 'Tis a pity. Thank you so much, Cecilia. :)
Date: 11/12/2013 8:38:00 AM
A very beautiful t heartfelt poem which was excellently written both from your very loving heart and brilliant mind my dear friend Drake. So love it and enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing my very dear friend. Thank you so much as well for your precious time to read my work and for the inspiring comments. Thank u as well for the love & concern to the Phil. I've just read your blog. Sorry for being late. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/12/2013 9:16:00 AM
I'm glad to help however little way I can, Leonora. Thanks so much for coming by here.
Date: 11/11/2013 11:41:00 PM
Hi Drake; the last stanza says it all. I always say - if someone don't want you, you don't need them either. there will always be someone better. Thanks for sharing and smile... Lucilla
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/12/2013 7:21:00 AM
Yes!!! Absolutely! That is precisely it. The whole "want what you can't have" thing can break a person. Thank you for that great comment, Lucilla! :)
Date: 11/11/2013 1:38:00 PM
Very nice sorrowful, twisty piece, beautifully written, as usual... Jack
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/12/2013 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jack! =)
Date: 11/11/2013 11:45:00 AM
Great verse Drake. I wish to master free verse in this way. I'm still wet behind the ear. Thanks for giving me such an induction. Friend, JM
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/11/2013 11:51:00 AM
With Free Verse, it's all in the spacing of your lines and how "efficient" your lines are. Meaning, cut out the cluttered, unnecessary words. Keep a tight focus on the ultimate message of the Free Verse. But, how you express that message, it's up to you...thus, "Free". I hope that guidance helps a little? Hopefully? :) Thank you very much on this, Joseph.
Date: 11/11/2013 11:22:00 AM
Man alive... your words are awesome as always !! Sending you an inbox re: USA trip.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/11/2013 11:34:00 AM
=D hey there, Kim! Awesome, sounds good!
Date: 11/11/2013 10:08:00 AM
reciprocity is the main ingredient in anything...what if people are not on the same page?.. a most intruiging write that separates the men from the boys, the women from girls, venus from mars... riveting in its imagistic expression.. yeah!..:) huggs
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/11/2013 10:31:00 AM
If two aren't on the same page, then the book won't have a good ending and end up on the Clearance rack at a Wal-Mart or Target. ;-) You started saying "Venus from Mars"...if you had went with a "Uranus" joke, I'd have collapsed in laughs. Thank you so much, Nette! =D You're so so so awesome!
Date: 11/11/2013 9:56:00 AM
Good writing Drake. In Re: to you recent question. I am in Cali. on business a couple times a year.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/11/2013 10:27:00 AM
Hey there! Thank you, Cindy! Oh, cool stuff! It would've been cool if you were in Cali too! That'd be like 3 or 4 of us on PS that are in this state. :)
Date: 11/11/2013 9:44:00 AM
Good morning Drake. I responded to your comment on my last poem. I hope you are having a great day.
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/11/2013 10:24:00 AM
Sweet! =) I sure am! I hope you are too.
Date: 11/11/2013 8:30:00 AM
Very very clever write..the last stanza took my breath away..( RETURN THE FAVOUR. .) DRAKE , I seriously believe that you are an intelligent writer..I enjoyed this...cheers !
Login to Reply
Fiery Avatar
Red Fiery
Date: 11/13/2013 2:59:00 AM
i was a bit lost..it happens with me time to time...:(
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/11/2013 8:33:00 AM
Hey Red!!!!! It's been so long!!! =D Thank you so much for that. Catch your breath, ok? =) You rock! It's great to see you around again!
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/11/2013 8:32:00 AM
Hey sir! =) Wow, "She's"...I completely missed that. Shame on me. Thanks! Fixed now! Nonetheless, "recycled yesterdays", the only kind of recycling that isn't good for our environment. ;-) Thanks so much, C.L.! =D
Date: 11/11/2013 8:02:00 AM
I like your very modern, clever and original wording. I say this a lot, but I really admire your style. :) Nice verse. Always, Laura
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/11/2013 8:25:00 AM
Laura!!! Hi. =) And I admire whenever you stop by here...that is greatly appreciated. But, if ANYBODY has clever wording, it's you. Thank you so much. This was a pleasant surprise. =D
Date: 11/10/2013 7:23:00 PM
This is a very inspiring poem.Drake.I do find it sad but sad are really the most beautiful poems Drake.Im going to favour this gem.You are so very talented!!Hope she came back to you with lasagnia..m &m s..ovaltine.wearing a dusty blue jasmine in her hair and a smile : )
Login to Reply
Tacito Avatar
Poet Tacito
Date: 11/10/2013 9:34:00 PM
It is certainly sad, yes. Came back to me? I don't wait for anybody, Charmaine. :) Life will happen between two things, how I make it happen and how everything else happens out of my control. But, now that you say that, I could use some lasagna. =D Thank you so much!!!
12
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad