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December. 6. 2024
Pick a Title.Vol. 47. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Edward Ibeh
~ Placed Second~

 

In the wild confusion of my life, I saw your face, A kind countenance making bright my days. Through rugged tracks when I stumbled along, I felt an unseen hand holding me strong. When bewildered by the horrid scenes of death, You assured that life extends beyond mortal breath. When lost in the dank and dark alley of wickedness, You diverted my steps into the well-lit path of righteousness. When I gloated over my own trivial accomplishments, You reminded me of my littleness through mild chastisements. When I lost myself in the grip of vanity, You opened my inner eye to restore my sanity. When tossed by the currents of fiery storms, Lord, you made me seek the safety of your arms. When drowning in the sea of escalating pain, You strengthened and sustained me, and kept me sane. When many got wiped out from the face of the Earth Without seeing a new day’s golden birth, Thank you for allowing me to see this glorious dawn. ‘Extend your hand’, I pray, for me to hold on! Make me feel, you are there in every rhythm of my life More when life becomes burdensome with problems rife. Over the arid deserts and the stormy turbulent sea, I pray to be by my side as an abiding presence, piloting me. My Lord, without you, my life will be in peril. Never let me fall into the snares of the devil. Do not desert me, stay by my side now and ever. Be my guiding light and sanctify my every endeavor!

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Date: 12/12/2024 2:48:00 AM
"When tossed by the currents of fiery storms, Lord, you made me seek the safety of your arms" - Very beautiful lines. Grand poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/11/2024 6:04:00 PM
Valsa, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this delightful spiritual piece. This one speaks to me. Thoroughly enjoyed.
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Date: 12/11/2024 9:40:00 PM
Dear Edward, you have never disappointed me. Thank you so much. By the grace of God, so far, I could write something to my heart's content on the topics you have given.
Date: 12/6/2024 6:58:00 PM
A poem, a prayer, and a story of faith, you have shared a beautiful love of God. Strength permeates your words.
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Date: 12/6/2024 2:47:00 PM
"When drowning in the sea of escalating pain, You strengthened and sustained me, and kept me sane." -- this one I can relate to in depth. A very positive, spiritual poem, Valsa; God, His Love and Presence is everything. Nothing else matters in the long run. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 12/6/2024 12:28:00 PM
Hello Valsa, this is very heartfelt and sincere, written by a true believer in the power of our Creator. Have a great weekend, my friend. Stay Blessed.
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Date: 12/6/2024 12:29:00 AM
Quite an emotional and inspiring verse Valsa, this is so well written. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 12/6/2024 12:05:00 AM
so touching and inspiring poem, a gift from God
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Date: 12/5/2024 10:55:00 PM
Dear sweet valsa, this is such a heartfelt poem , i can feel your faith and the gratitude you have within your heart for the divine creator through this write! So many brilliant lines in this poem. I especially love the lines “ When tossed by the currents of fiery storms, Lord! You made me seek the safety of your arms. When drowning in the sea of escalating pain, You strengthened and sustained me, and kept me sane. “The subtle use of alliterations as well as the way youv phrased them truly is impressive! An impeccable write! Full of light and love! And the ending is so heartfelt and soulfully moving! Pleasure reading you today. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always!
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