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Poetry/Monchielle Stanza/Crying Mercy
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1690-570-03
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, December 03, 2024
For the International Contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol.47
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 12/11/2024

Third Place

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I am crying sorrow,
   daggers have pierced my heart;
         Lord, please grant me mercy,
             I mourn in dreams all night,  
                          for peace I am thirsty.

I am crying sorrow,
   my house is weather stained;
          threads of happy are rare,
                   I pray for compassion,
                      dear Lord, please have a care.

I am crying sorrow,
   clouds like gauzy curtains;
              red sun rising as blood,
                      to shine as a jewel,
                         and I pick wild rosebud.

I am crying sorrow,
   and wishing for mercy;
      send me grace and blessings,
                oh, give me tenderness,
                      and sweet happy endings.

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Date: 12/12/2024 3:09:00 AM
"daggers have pierced my heart" - very picturesque and passion-filled. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/12/2024 2:47:00 PM
Chris, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 12/11/2024 9:05:00 PM
Constance, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully written poem. I love the format and flow. Great job!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/12/2024 2:48:00 PM
Edward, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the congratulations and compliment, blessings
Date: 12/3/2024 5:23:00 PM
You’ve written very merciful thoughts with beautiful words, Constance. Soup mail.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2024 11:11:00 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, love Constance
Date: 12/3/2024 3:43:00 PM
This is interesting. Is it more sorrowful to start a poem, or to end it. Keep writing. It's a good thing.
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Date: 12/3/2024 5:20:00 PM
Hilda, thank you for the comment and compliment, blessings
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