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Crying Hands

These once nimble fingers, pinned diapers on your behind. Swatted the misbehaving toddler, when you got out of line. Held you the first day of school, applauded loudly as the graduate passed. Waved goodbye when you moved to college, prayed your marriage and happiness would last. I use words to paint memories, to remind me how it began. But now these once nimble fingers, can barely hold my pen. I want to tell you one last time, before these hands of mine go. I’d like to give you one last rhyme, to tell you daughter, how I love you so.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 2/4/2024 11:50:00 AM
As a dad to two daughters, I love your poem.. so lovely my friend..
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 8:01:00 PM
I appreciate it, Silent One.
Date: 2/4/2024 4:14:00 AM
Lovely poem I enjoyed reading your work.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 8:01:00 PM
Thank you Yolanda.
Date: 2/4/2024 3:19:00 AM
- A beautiful poem for your daughter, Jerry :) - hugs
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Anne,
Date: 2/3/2024 9:58:00 PM
A life succinctly described with the love of a daughter. Loved it. Reminded me of my only daughter. Well done.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Victor
Date: 2/3/2024 9:26:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Jerry. Your daughter will love it. Great job of tying life's major steps into a tribute to your daughter. Have a pleasant Sunday, my friend. Bill
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 7:58:00 PM
Appreciate the Fav, Bill. Have a great day, my friend.
Date: 2/3/2024 7:30:00 PM
I think this poem captures the bond between you and your child sweetly and with honesty. I think she would love the poem you crafted with your nimble fingers.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Triny.
Date: 2/3/2024 7:14:00 PM
Sweet, sweeter and sweetest. This is awesome and humbling at the same time. Fine poem, Jerry, methinks. ~ Gershon
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 7:57:00 PM
I appreciate your fine words of encouragement, my friend. Thank you.
Date: 2/3/2024 6:58:00 PM
B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 7:55:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by.
Date: 2/3/2024 4:30:00 PM
absolutely touching father-daughter poem! Made me think of my own father and our special bond. Teary-eyed....hope you share this poem with your daughter. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 7:54:00 PM
I certainly will.
Date: 2/3/2024 2:16:00 PM
Brother Jerry that is just so beautiful!! Please make sure your daughter reads it …….Sister Debx
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/5/2024 7:53:00 PM
I will do that for sure. Thanks Sister Deb

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