Crying Hands

These once nimble fingers,
pinned diapers on your behind.
Swatted the misbehaving toddler,
when you got out of line.

Held you the first day of school,
applauded loudly as the graduate passed.
Waved goodbye when you moved to college,
prayed your marriage and happiness would last.

I use words to paint memories,
to remind me how it began.
But now these once nimble fingers,
can barely hold my pen.

I want to tell you one last time,
before these hands of mine go.
I’d like to give you one last rhyme,
to tell you daughter, how I love you so.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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February 4, 2024 at 11:50 AM
As a dad to two daughters, I love your poem.. so lovely my friend..
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 8:01 PM
I appreciate it, Silent One.
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February 4, 2024 at 4:14 AM
Lovely poem I enjoyed reading your work.
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Thank you Yolanda.
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February 4, 2024 at 3:19 AM
- A beautiful poem for your daughter, Jerry :) - hugs
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:59 PM
Thank you Anne,
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February 3, 2024 at 9:58 PM
A life succinctly described with the love of a daughter. Loved it. Reminded me of my only daughter. Well done.
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:59 PM
Thank you Victor
Baker Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 9:26 PM
A FAV for my list, Jerry. Your daughter will love it. Great job of tying life's major steps into a tribute to your daughter. Have a pleasant Sunday, my friend. Bill
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:58 PM
Appreciate the Fav, Bill. Have a great day, my friend.
Xiang Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 7:30 PM
I think this poem captures the bond between you and your child sweetly and with honesty. I think she would love the poem you crafted with your nimble fingers.
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:58 PM
Thank you Triny.
Wolf Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 7:14 PM
Sweet, sweeter and sweetest. This is awesome and humbling at the same time. Fine poem, Jerry, methinks. ~ Gershon
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:57 PM
I appreciate your fine words of encouragement, my friend. Thank you.
Seeker Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 6:58 PM
B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Thank you for dropping by.
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February 3, 2024 at 2:16 PM
Brother Jerry that is just so beautiful!! Please make sure your daughter reads it …….Sister Debx
Brotherton Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:53 PM
I will do that for sure. Thanks Sister Deb
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