Cry In the Dark

As you cry in the dark and your tears find the pillow
You think I don't know, those tears filled with such sorrow
Are for that long ago love, then comes tomorrow
I wish for today, your heart I could borrow

Dreams filled with the memory of her face
Wisps of her hair, visions of ribbon and lace
The look in her eyes, another time and place
I wish this from your mind, I could forever erase

But war time came and took you away
And never knowing your fate, day after day
Time took its toll, as time will do
She went on with life, her life without you

As I cry in the dark and my tears find the pillow
You'll never know, these tears filled with such sorrow
Are those longing for love, again comes tomorrow
I wish for today, your heart I could borrow

©Donna Jones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Manassian Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 10:52 PM
How did I miss this one, MD? And you won! I see why. It is so so beautiful and touching and...well, the feelings you expressed seem to come from a place I know well. You are amazing and I'm so so proud of you. Love you, MD.
Jones Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 5:57 AM
Well....you are one busy lady....that's how....you have a huge fan base......no big deal....I have less and less time as spring and summer approach...garden and canning season and mowing two acres....I live on ten acres...brush hog about five....but will keep up best I can...luv MD
Kearley Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:03 AM
:*( Oh....You brought me to tears with this fine write...And you can call me Jimmy if you like. :o)
Jones Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 9:59 PM
Hey Dan....so very sweet ...but you just keep smiling..I just think you and jimmy are both good men...
Duncan Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 10:31 PM
nicely done Donna, I do hope you won with this one ;}
Jones Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 9:56 PM
Thanks dear Debbie...hope you are doing well....
Ryerson Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:20 AM
Oh yes Donna...Beautifully done...Congratulations - Tim
Jones Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:02 PM
Thanks Tim...
Bateson Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 5:48 AM
Sad and beautiful. Congrats.
Jones Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:02 PM
Thank you...
Oyewole Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 2:19 AM
Congrats Donna on your deserving win.~A.O
Jones Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:03 PM
Appreciate it A.O..:-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Donna, Congratulations on your wonderful win with this very moving poem!
Jones Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Thank you Connie
A   Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 7:29 PM
Donna, Congratulations in Craig's "Empty Tissue Box " contest;-) always~ PD
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Thanks Linda...much appreciated...:-)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 4:50 PM
enjoyed reading again, great job and win.
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Thanks Richard...
Macfarlane Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 4:07 PM
-Your heart I could borrow-.....love that line! A touching emotional write! Big congrats on your win! Hugs
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Thanks Cecilia ...
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 3:42 PM
a big congratulations on this one. Very well emoted!!! just what the judge ordered!
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:34 PM
Thank you Andrea...:-)
Guzzi Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 7:02 PM
Congrad's on Your win, Light & Love
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:19 PM
Thank you Debbie
Sister Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Very nice, congrats on your win. J.
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Thanks!!!
Richards Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 2:34 PM
This could almost be set to music.....such a sad sad love song....beautifully done!
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Appreciate that Carrie...
May Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 11:05 AM
congrats on your win Donna
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Thanks Joseph
Minardi Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 10:25 AM
Donna, i love this poem. I can taste pain on my tongue while reading it. congrats on the win.
Jones Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Dinda ...
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Outstanding! Excellent rhyming and flow, and such a bittersweet message. I love the way you conclude by saying 'As I cry...' echoing the 'As you cry...' of the first verse, and your powerful phrasing and imagery. Well done Donna!! Best wishes, Keith
Jones Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 8:47 PM
Thank you for the kind words Keith....
Lamoureux Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:15 PM
You should be very proud of this poem, it is very moving. I love the line Cry in the Dark. Well done Donna. Thanks as well for your many visits, they are appreciated. You are a sweetheart.
Jones Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 6:17 AM
Thank you a lot Richard.
May Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 7:51 PM
wonderful write Donna...hugs
Jones Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 6:17 AM
:-) thanks Joseph.....
Hendricks Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 9:17 PM
I love your rhyming scheme, not to mention your content, though sad. My very best to you, my friend. A smooth and polished write, Donna. Nice one :)
Jones Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Thanks Delysia.....much appreciated....
Fisher Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 2:34 PM
I enjoyed the nice melodic flow to this piece, though painful subject.
Jones Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Thanks David...
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:40 AM
So sad tears, in a lovely poem Donna. - Wish you all the best ..... love will come again .... one day. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jones Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Anne Lise.
Goff Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Donna....1st. Thanks for stopping by my humble work...this art of yours brought moisture to my eyes...not often here...funny, your topic nails the ? you asked of my ending...love, jimbo
Jones Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:56 AM
God bless you Jimbo...Donna
Kendrick Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Very emotive and expressive work..The loss of someone that is loved in wartime must be a very hard thing..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Jones Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Yes, thanks Sara
Ellison Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 6:22 AM
BRILLIANT! And this comes from The Quatrain King!!! LOL I like the fact you ended off repeating the first verse for emphasis which is something I often do... great write, dear Donna! Love ya! Hugs, Jack xox
Jones Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Jack....:-)
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