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Crushed Concrete

CRUSHED CONCRETE UNSTEELED / SEPTEMBER BLUES

BOMBS xxxxxxxxxx           HOPE                               
RUINS xxxxxxxxxxx             PEACE
DRONES xxxxxxxxx                  LOVE 


MEMEME xxxxxxxxx                    KIND
xx EGOEGO  xxxxxx                         NESS
DIVISION   xxxxxxx                     COM
*** HIERARCHY ***                            PASSION
HEGEMONY xxxxxxx                 EMPATHY                                                 
 
     
HELL BENT  DOGMA                      
xxxxxxx CONCRETE                   S      R                                              << <<
TOWER xxxxxxxxxx                T       E                                              <<<
xxxxxxx CONCRETE              E        S                  ////// PLAIN PLANE  MAD  TERROR~~~
ILLUSION xxxxxxxx                E     E                   \\\\\\ BAD HUMAN FLIGHT ERROR~~~              
xxxxxxx CONCRETE                   L     R                                              WIN
DECEPTION  xxxxxx                    E     V        CRUS                               GS <<
DEFENCE  xxxxxxxx                      D     E         HED                                                                                                                        
DELUSION  xxxxxxx
DECLINE xxxxxxxxx                   HELP
DELUGE  xxxxxxxxx                            HELP US


xxxx CAPITAL xxxxx                       MULTI    
*** MILITARY xxxxx                                  CULTURE
xxxxINDUSTRY xxxx                                SKIN                   
xxxxxxxx   POVERTY                                          TONE
GREED xxxxxxxxxxx                 COLOUR
xx DISCRIMINATION                           BLIND
COLONIALISATION x                           ONE RACE
CIVIL WAR xxxxxxxx                                  SOCIAL REST
UNCIVIL WAR  xxxxx                       TRUCE TRUTH


xxxxxx DIE-VERSITY                   DIVERSITY
xx  SHARES STOCKS                           CO
xxxxxx   HIERARCHY                             OPERATION
SHACKLES   xxxxxxx                          FREEDOM
DOMINATION xxxxxx                               LIBERTY 
DESTRUCTION xxxxx             xxxx HAPPINESS xxxx               
xxxx INEQUALITY  xx             xxxx JUSTICE  xxxxxx
xxxx  MONEY  xxxxxx             xxxx   EQUALITY xxxx
CRIME  CRIME CRIME             REASON YES REASON


TWO PILLARS ONE PLANET CRUSHED CONCRETE ONE MAD IGNORANT WORLD

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Ann Foster Date: 7/13/2019 12:49:00 PM This was a fun read. Wonderful work my friend. Ann Login to Reply

Literary Waves Date: 7/10/2019 4:29:00 PM very impressive. Login to Reply

Daniel Schack Date: 7/8/2019 6:46:00 PM reads like a phrophetic and realistically paranoid computer printout. diabolically deep. well done. feel free to read/comment on mine on poetrysoup.com. sincerely, Mr. Daniel Schack Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 7/10/2019 6:06:00 AM Thank you Daniel. I appreciate this. Kind wishes, Kai

Franci Hoffman Date: 7/8/2019 3:17:00 PM Powerful words and powerfully structured. A true wake up call. Masterfully penned. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 7/10/2019 6:05:00 AM Thank you Franci. I had forgotten that I had written this poem. Shape poems are a great challenge. Kind wishes, Kai

Donna Roberts Date: 12/29/2016 2:16:00 PM WHOA Congratulations on POTD Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/30/2016 2:41:00 AM Thank you Donna.

Jannie Breedt Date: 12/28/2016 1:01:00 AM Must be Aleppo. You illustrate the sheer insanity and bloodlust . Hatred everywhere. A poem to shake and wake us up. Jannie Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/28/2016 2:37:00 AM It is Aleppo and everywhere...

Bernard F. Asuncion Date: 12/28/2016 12:12:00 AM It really amazes me to the max+++++++++++++ congrats on being selected++++++++++ Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/28/2016 2:37:00 AM Thank you Bernard. I appreciate this and I am chuffed...

Neo Masetlane Date: 12/27/2016 1:46:00 PM a very extraordinary piece of art Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/28/2016 2:38:00 AM Thank you Neo...

Casarah Nance Date: 12/27/2016 1:23:00 PM impressive write, worthy of the poem of the day feature and applause, well done. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/28/2016 2:39:00 AM Thank you Casarah. My message for the New Year. Blessings and wishes, Kai

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/27/2016 9:47:00 AM Your heavy concrete poem conked me on the head w/it's profound truth, Michael. An outstanding poem, visually and intellectually. Keep dropping the knowledge and love. Yep, I gonna have to say ... keep dropping the bomb on us. Greetings w/love from Dr. Strangelove. Have a blessed holiday. And congrats on POTD. Love and peace to you. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/28/2016 2:39:00 AM Thanks Freddie. Wishes for the New Year. Love and Peace to you too...XXX Kai

Doug Vinson Date: 12/27/2016 8:54:00 AM Kai, great vision. Quite a crushing there. Since, have we become "used" to acts of terror? Are we getting somewhat desensitized? I think so. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/28/2016 2:40:00 AM Thank you. True. Many wishes, Kai

Akkina Downing Date: 12/27/2016 8:17:00 AM It sure is a mad world. No corner is safer than the center, everywhere is damaged! Congratulation on a potd, Kai. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/28/2016 2:40:00 AM Mad world indeed. May there lies a better year ahead of us. Many wishes, Kai

Charlie Smith Date: 12/27/2016 8:07:00 AM Congratulations for POTD honors Kai... Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/28/2016 2:41:00 AM Thank you Charlie. Wishing you and all of us a good New Year. Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/27/2016 6:21:00 AM - Creative and powerful, Kai - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jannie Breedt Date: 12/27/2016 4:30:00 AM Hi Kai. All in capitals. How much passion and anger ? Is this for Aleppo or SA? Some have a white chrismas we have a wet chrisrmas dripping in blood. It all upsets me. Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 12/25/2016 12:15:00 PM *tears* Kai this is outspokenly captivating. Well done my friend!! Well done!! Big Hugggs!! Deb Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/26/2016 1:34:00 AM Thanks Deb. We will have to wait for what 2017 brings. The doers and shapers might need a little help from ordinary people...

Darren White Date: 12/25/2016 6:33:00 AM KAI!! I have no words for it. Not only is it visually stunning, but the message in it, the terror and all that pain, before and ever since. I don't care how well or bad you do in any contest... For me THIS is it. 7 and fav. Login to Reply Kai Michael Neumann Date: 12/26/2016 1:33:00 AM Thanks Darren. Wishing for a better 2017...