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Crushed

On the day of the contest, she rushed, With her hair looking hardly half-brushed. Yet she took to the stage Glancing down at the page And read confidently, feeling flushed. Back at home, all her family just gushed When she read them her poems; now the hushed Crowd of spectators stared As the winners were aired. Unprepared for defeat, she felt crushed. (for the contest of Anthony Biaanco)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/16/2020 3:00:00 PM
oh how disappointing this would be - I am sure its not about you - you would charm an audience with your witty poems; good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/16/2020 2:54:00 PM
Reminded me how my eldest sister rehearsed and rehearsed and rehearsed a song for a competition but tripped as she entered the stage and fell flat on her face. Everyone burst out laughing. Some people give up, others make a career out of losing - just ask Trump! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/15/2020 7:22:00 PM
Ooh... Does she need a 'safe space' now? -- Just kidding. Nice limerick! :) gw
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Date: 6/15/2020 4:08:00 PM
Agh well back to the drawing board, there's always next time, never give up. Good luck in the contest Ilene, I got a feeling you wont feel crushed with this well written lim. Tom
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