Crumpled Thoughts Now Mine

I took one thought, which then led to some others.
These thoughts were not my own, but they conveyed
a picture bigger than my mind alone
could conjure, and a frame for them I made.

I showed this collage of bright thoughts to others -
thoughts articulated by stunning minds.
So proud was I to frame them for display.
I looked at all of them as precious finds.

But many could not see the beauty in them
(the beauty of their logic). Then I saw
some people spat on them and called as garbage
those very thoughts that filled me with such awe.

Some glanced at them and said they might have credence.
Most people would not look at them at all.
The ones who spat on them walked right up to them
and ripped them from the frame up on my wall.

They took those brilliant thoughts I found so precious
(those thoughts which formed ideas I’d found true)
and mocking them, they cumpled them all up.
Into the garbage bin those thoughts they threw.

I picked them up, uncrumpling them, and since
great people’s thoughts they are (not pearls for swine),
I’ll show them to the few whom I can trust
to not mock thoughts that have turned into mine.

Jan. 10, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/1/2021 5:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win. One of my grandfather's sayings comes to mind. "These things are sent to try us and by God they do."
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Date: 1/19/2021 9:15:00 AM
Hi Andrea my friend, sorry I missed your POTD, congratulations my friend - your crumbled thoughts now mine is thought provoking - is it jealousy that these people feel, or perhaps that you are much greater competition , than they ever could be! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 1/17/2021 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on first place for this excellent, thoughtful write. ~ John
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Date: 1/17/2021 10:04:00 AM
this one was like a rabbit punch to the solar plexus....direct and stunning. Well done Andrea. I had the same feeling as Cecilia on it being quite appropriate for today's thought mongers.. Glad you played in the contest
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Date: 1/14/2021 8:15:00 AM
These crumpled thoughts so reflect on what is happening in the world today. A wonderful poem Andrea. Congratulations on your POTD. Hugs
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Date: 1/13/2021 3:37:00 PM
Whoa! A searing write. Felt like my own heart was ripped out and dumped in the garbage bin. Quite moving, Andrea, and congrats on POTD! Here's to Calm, Undisturbed Reflection! :) gw
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Date: 1/13/2021 2:18:00 PM
superbly written and so very apropos for today's environment.
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Date: 1/12/2021 11:52:00 PM
One man's garbage is another's treasure. It has been my experience that some people find my writing not worth their time and other's really like it. When you share your writing and thoughts you bare your soul and I find that beautiful. Well Done my friend. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/12/2021 9:09:00 PM
"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder" So true is this statement. Many will look beyond the scribbling, only to see just that "A Scribble" Those that are Humble- will see so much more. A Priceless Masterpiece. You have created a precious little gem here. I am holding your thoughts so close. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/12/2021 8:04:00 PM
This is a brilliant piece Andrea. So many things come to mind about the chaos that is happening in our world today. The disrespect shown to those who think differently. It also brings to mind the Mandela effect and how many reject these changes that are going on without doing their own research. Having consideration and respect for others is the keyword. I’m so happy to see this excellent piece rewarded with POTD honors. Congratulations my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/12/2021 6:27:00 PM
If only some readers could be vetted, Andrea, in more ways than one, this is a lovely emotional write, I am glad each crumpled thought was picked up, and put to better use, they were I am sure more well deserving . . . ; )
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Date: 1/12/2021 3:25:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/12/2021 2:01:00 PM
This one came from my heart big-time, so I am so thrilled it got POTD and so many nice comments. Thanks to all of you below who said nice things about this one.
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Date: 1/12/2021 11:02:00 AM
Oh goodness! This is powerful! Maybe it’s jusr me, but 1st, taken literally, it spoke to me of the perils of Acceptance as you could say We Are our Thoughts esp as poets. 2nd, I took it as a brilliant metaphor for Christ who was denied for his way of thinking about living which was him & spat on.Thank you Great work
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Date: 1/12/2021 10:33:00 AM
Congrats for the honor of POTD with this splendid verse! Bob H
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Date: 1/12/2021 10:20:00 AM
I felt that! Powerfully penned. Excellent piece for the contest too, my best to you! xomo
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Date: 1/12/2021 9:40:00 AM
The imagery you use for thoughts being passed from others to you to others is very creative, like pieces of paper being crumpled. The emotions are well represented and a poignant reminder to show respect and kindness for the thoughts and perspectives people come to believe. Social media protocol and courtesy is a lesson we are all still learning, and an abundance of gentility is needed to avoid miscommunications and hurt. Great poem, dear friend, worthy of the honor ~ John
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Date: 1/12/2021 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Andrea. Wonderful use of metaphor along with striking images - "frame upon the wall." It makes me sad to know that many people do not have the ability to talk about differences of opinion with civility. Blessings to you my friend.
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Date: 1/12/2021 8:31:00 AM
Back with congrats Andrea--on poem of the day.
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Date: 1/12/2021 7:48:00 AM
If any one deserve a POTD, it's you. My heartfelt congratulations of the reward. The poem is so well thought out. Shows some people ought not to be judgemental. ~~
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Date: 1/12/2021 7:38:00 AM
Love the poetry here...Congratulations Andrea Dietrich...Well said.
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Date: 1/12/2021 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful story/write. Yes, our thoughts are ours. When something like this happens, we find out who our friends really are. Enjoy your win/day with blessings......................
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Date: 1/12/2021 7:02:00 AM
Andrea, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY _Constance
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Date: 1/12/2021 6:07:00 AM
A superb write, and congratulations on potd :)
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Date: 1/12/2021 6:04:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, This is an excellent take on the contest theme. I found it to be well written, clever, and creative. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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