Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Crumpled Tears : a Quinzaine Poem

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tears spill crumpled memories
are they laundered dry?
or rehashed?




* quinzaine is a 3-line poem consisting of 15 syllables: 7/5/3.
    the first line makes a statement,
    the next two ask a question concerning that statement


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Contest: Brian Strand”s “ Whatever"

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2011 at 10:07 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Nette. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2011 at 4:55 PM soupmail

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2011 at 4:47 PM Congratulations, Nette, on your awesome win. A new form I had never seen before too!

Robert A. Dufresne May 15, 2011 at 5:50 AM ooh yeah ..love this poem lesson and the awesome imagery of your poem, Nette. Thank you so much for both. Talent seems more concentrated somehow in these short poetic gems, doesn't it ? Congratulations to you! (I will be attempting one of these soon I hope)

Constance La France May 14, 2011 at 9:58 PM This form is new to me, but I really like it, must try it, I love that first line~~

Matt Hunt May 14, 2011 at 9:50 PM Great job with this! Congrats on your win. It's an honor to be up there with you guys. God Bless. R.M.

Matt Hunt May 14, 2011 at 9:49 PM Great job with this! Congrats on your win. It's an honor to be up there with you guys. God Bless. R.M.

Barbara Gorelick May 14, 2011 at 8:27 PM The from is new to me..I like it...and I like your poem. Congrats on your win. BG

John Freeman May 14, 2011 at 6:04 PM Cool Nette! Great to see you in a top spot again. Congratulations on your poem's success in Brian's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire May 14, 2011 at 1:50 PM Dear Nette, Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico May 14, 2011 at 1:32 PM A winner from the moment you wrote it... Congrats my dear Poet friend...luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta May 14, 2011 at 1:20 PM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 14, 2011 at 12:56 PM hey hey hey ..yeah yeah yeah.. congrats Nette on your big win in Whatever contest with this super write and form luv.. enjoy a perfect win with luv..my sweet friend..

Carolyn Devonshire May 14, 2011 at 10:55 AM Sometimes after crying I do feel "laundered dry," Nette. Great use of a form that is new to me. Best wishes of success in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2011 at 1:03 AM Hi, Nette. you are very well informed on poetry forms. And you adhered perfectly to this form's definition. It was nice seeing you here. I am going to go off now finally!! Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet May 13, 2011 at 8:05 PM Amazing poetry from you Nette.A new form learnt.Best wishes....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 13, 2011 at 8:02 PM this is simply amazing Nette dear friend.. interesting questions to ponder as your intro line has deep impact luv.. much success in Brian's contest.. u also have soup mail..happy weekend..

Sarah Seraphin May 13, 2011 at 1:07 PM * “Your Beauty Is Sooo Gifted & Bright * Blessed & Hip Unto Poetry's Trip * Beautiful Nette Oncloud * And As For This Lovely Posed In Poe * Hopefully It Shall Always Be The Afore * Rather Than Latter Of The Museful Question Brushed * Smile * You Are A Very Unique, Talented & Beautiful Poetess * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2011 at 11:41 AM oo,, nice Nette,,, i like the sense here,,, and good luck to you,,kuddos,,,p,.d.

Suresh Iyer May 13, 2011 at 11:33 AM coming across this form of poem for first time very nicely expressed cheers suresh