Cruelty

Cunning with wily mind crafting ways of deceit. Crooked with twisted heart curating ways to harm. Crude with boorish actions causing wild damages. Cruelty embodied! 08/19/2016 Note : For the contest (A poem that you enjoyed) by Lewis Raynes. *Placed Ninth*

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/18/2016 12:13:00 AM

A 7 for this excellent WINNING poem Afzal! Janice

Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/18/2016 1:33:00 AM

Thank you, Janice.

Sonia Walker

Date: 9/17/2016 11:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement. I can relate to your poem. No one enjoys being the object or victim of a prankster. You rose above that by writing your poem and sharing with us. ~ Sonia

Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/18/2016 1:32:00 AM

Yes it was such a relief writing this poem. Thank you very much , Sonia.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2016 3:46:00 PM

This is good and I would have expected to see it on the winners' list, Afzal! Better luck next time, though if I remember rightly you already were a winner in the Pleiades B contest. ~ Regards // paul

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/26/2016 11:55:00 PM

Thank you for the gracious compliment, Paul. Well, I didn't enter this poem in the C-Pleiades contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 2:43:00 AM

Excellent Afzal! I don't know how you managed it in a nutshell! Bravo! 7 ; )

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/25/2016 4:13:00 AM

Thank you for the gracious compliment, Connie.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/21/2016 8:31:00 AM

Good work Afzal and best wishes...

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/21/2016 10:03:00 AM

Thanx, Charlie.