Cruel Yule

Desperate to fill voids
underneath trees,
within stockings,
and in children’s hearts,
society’s seconds, 
scratch-and-dent people,
unemployed close outs,
pick the bones of Christmas,
seeking salvation in
the clearanced, 
discontinued,
and reduced-to-sell.

It’s the thought that counts,
but it’s the cash that’s counted
when money’s tight 
as a hangman’s noose.
Each trinket is wrapped
in bits of brightness,
with love and hope,
and a prayer that it’s enough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Clemons Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 8:32 PM
So truth in this short, deeply written poem, Gary. Enjoyable in its expression. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace,
Watkins Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 8:42 PM
Thank you. I did enjoy reading a few of your pieces. Gary
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Thanks for your much needed point of view, and entering the contest, I hope this year you have a great Christmas. Congrad's on your win!
Watkins Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 12:14 AM
Thank you, Debbie. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas season, too.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 6:05 AM
Nice one Gary, congratulations xx
Watkins Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 1:34 PM
Thank you, Mandy, and congratulations to you as well.
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 11:20 PM
Congrats on the win, gary
Watkins Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 11:37 PM
Thank you and congratulations to you, too. Gary
Guzzi Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Please enter this in my contest? [if it is closed soup mail me & I will re-open] Light & Love
Watkins Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 5:22 PM
Hi Debbie, I sent a soup mail asking if you could reopen the contest. Thank you for asking! Gary
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