Brennan Marlow Poet ABC

Cruel World

Let me start by saying "Screw the world!" 
All the people in it. Every boy and girl.
I'm forced to stand here and endure all this traumatizing stuff that's right outside my door.
All I see is nasty whores, and crazy methheads. 
They would be better off dead.
Somewhere face down in a ditch. I'm makin' the bed.
I'm seeing red and it's been that way for awhile.
I got the heater next to me, bout to spark the lighter.
I'm about to clean this town.
That's just how I'm feeling now.
I don't see no good, nothing to make this angry face smile.
I guess I'll keep pushing on.
On to the next one. Fire up the good then pass it to me, 
so I forget all about my worries.
I need it in a hurry, cause my mind is getting kind of scary.

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Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2015 at 5:16 PM Brennan, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A October 5, 2015 at 2:16 PM Hi Brennan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2015 at 3:11 AM - A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Brennan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)