Crucible

Crucible

Peer into an unpredictable universe 
Of ambivalent depths
A calyx cul-de-sac tipped up
Into a crucible of the unexplainable
Where curiosity strides into pure moments of mystique
 Fields of glory in bluebells
  Rusted milestones
   Hail ravaged wheat.

Echoes of the prophetic tongue
 Swirl in chanted brews and prayers
Mists, parted by potions, 
 Bleed new horizons rising like cities lost 
  In hundred year mists
Brewed in a grail uncovered from eon’s smothering dusts
Tasting ego and humility 
 That knows its need for divinity.

Mercy metastasized in every grieving limb
 And through the organ of the soul
Led through foreshadow’s chalice
       Into unfathomable days yet to be born.

5-1-23
Contest: Up to 20 Lines
Sponsor: Sotto Poet

Twenty lines.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 12:44 PM
You really know how to write free verse, Sam. I could never do one like this with such unique images!
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 12:50 PM
I am so grateful for your wonderful compliment Andrea. Thank you While I have always loved free verse it is my writing experiences and friends like you here on the soup that have helped me hone this poetic form with loving feedback and encouragement. What a treasure! A pearl of inestimable worth. And, I know you would write some wonderful free verse with your creativity and use of words! Take care!! Blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 12:44 PM
oh, and congrats on the win
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day..................
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 12:52 PM
Thank you so much Paula! Blessings to you!
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 10:07 AM
- A deep poem with meaning and great lines metaphorically, Sam :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
George Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 11:18 PM
"Brewed in a grail uncovered from eon’s smothering dusts/ Tasting ego and humility/ That knows its need for divinity." As ever, your poem is so deep, highlighting the ambivalence of life and the need for divinity. Congratulations dear Sam on your well deserved win.
Seeker Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 9:55 PM
A deep write, magnificently composed. Warmest congratulations on your win, Sam. Truly enjoyed the write
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so much Seeker. It is a gift to know you enjoyed this poem. Your amazing contest themes have been the source of so many moments of meditation for me. I have to give you credit for leading me down these paths exploring challenging concepts. So grateful. Take care. Sending you many blessings!!
Poet Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 9:20 PM
Sam, Congratulations on crafting such a lovely poem that combines the elegance of poetry with the wisdom of thought.
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so much Lasaad! This theme captured my imagination and would not let me go until I finished this poem. I am so grateful for your beautiful feedback and constant support my friend. It is a rich gift indeed. Blessings to you!
Turner Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 1:59 PM
I like the second verse best, then "mercy metastasized for eternity. What a thought that is? Deep and meaningful, Sam. Almost like figuring out a riddle. LOL I think I got it:)
Kauffman Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Thank you so much Daniel. I think you "got it" too! The phrase that you like went zinging around in my head looking for meaning for quite awhile. I was happy it found a home in this poem. Hope you are well. Take care. Blessings! So grateful for your always perceptive feedback and poems!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 4:11 AM
Interesting lines penned about crucible. We are in the beginning of a crucible here on this earth. Those that don't know what lies ahead need to read Revelations. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Your work reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
Faulkner Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 3:21 PM
Sam, your methaphors are magnificent, I am loving 'an unpredictable universe/of ambivalent depts' and 'like cities lost/in hundred year mists' - your last lines so intriguing, the days yet to be born are so infinite~
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Dear Michelle, I am so grateful for your lovely message and encouragement that deeply inspires me. Many thanks coming your way. This poem struggled to be born but I am grateful that I stuck with it. I really like the outcome! Sending you blessings!
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