Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Crowned Beauty

As the clock ticks 
echo carries within 
striking deep keys 
touching one soul 
flowing in feelings 
emotions swelling 
plays a sweet tune 
softly it sings 

in the deepest ocean 
you are a pearl 
of a goddess 
within two hearts 
a tide 
of precious feelings 
softy washed 
one treasure 

a beauty 
crowned queen 
sitting upon 
the throne 
within one heart 
golden shining 
beautiful love

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Cherl Dunn October 26, 2014 at 8:52 AM Liam a wonderful tribute to a lovely special love you share with your special someone, Congrads your a lucky man to find your life mate many lonely souls never have such good luck, I'm glad you like my docks so much cheri Liam Mcdaid October 26, 2014 at 9:45 AM cherl i am one of those lonely souls this i wrote to someone special even she hurt me yeah cherl love reading your pieces every story is different i must say and very enjoyable reads

Robin Davis November 4, 2013 at 7:08 PM Liam This is a loving tribute to someone special. The reader is taken on a journey of care and devotion from beginning to end. Nice job

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2013 at 6:26 PM the title is very fitting for this tribute to beauty.

Ken Carroll October 31, 2013 at 1:41 PM Hey Liam, Some good romantic stuff here.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2013 at 1:36 PM - Sweet love is like beautiful music ...... never get tired of listening. - Beautiful, Liam!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian October 31, 2013 at 8:35 AM A beautiful song of love....enchanting

Sarai Virden October 30, 2013 at 7:31 PM I could feel the intensity of your love for her in every line... A stunning work of art! Blessing dear Liam

Jack Ellison October 30, 2013 at 5:19 PM This is so beautifully and tenderly written my friend Liam! Why have I not read your poems before... I will from now on! A beautiful write...

Charmaine Chircop October 30, 2013 at 4:40 PM This is so beautiful..You.must be the knight in shining armour who steals the heart of the queen with such romantic verse..So very beautiful Liam..Very gentle and tender.