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Crowded thoughts

crowded thoughts and broken minds we think, we hope, we pray want so much Yet, do so little Aim for the stars but stay on the ground beating hearts and battered bodies we wish, we try, we want give nothing Yet expect everything so much hope much more despair so much good much more bad who decides? To live or to die Is it? to try everyday or try for one chance and let go waiting.. expecting.. ending. Joy

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Date: 11/1/2024 7:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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