Crowded Scene

murder of black umbrellas with clouds, bolts and rain — crows await clear sky 2/25/2018

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Leon Enriquez

Date: 2/28/2018 10:38:00 AM

Dear Kim: Nicely done! Leon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2018 11:43:00 AM

Thank you, Leon!

Lunita Blanca

Date: 2/28/2018 10:35:00 AM

My friend, so many people under black umbrellas today.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2018 11:42:00 AM

So true!

Janis Thompson

Date: 2/27/2018 5:46:00 PM

Well done haiku. But reading Andrea's post I must have missed the murder of crows analogy. I know a group of crows is called that but I am not fully understanding. Still it is a good entry.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 7:27:00 PM

The murder of black umbrellas mimics the crows. And what are the crows after...after the storm. Just some thoughts! Thanks! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2018 3:21:00 PM

oh, I love the tying it in with murder of crows. GREAT KU!!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 5:04:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!