Crow Stands Ready For a Compliment

Crow had been wanting to get out her umbrella someday.
Today was the day, for the rain came hard from far away.
She was loving her umbrella with red apples so pretty.
She stopped by a bus stop to say something witty.

Commuters got on and commuters got off.
She stood at that stop, while some of them scoffed.
She wanted them to notice her fuchsia boots too.
No one gave her a compliment, so after a bit, she flew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jones Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 6:35 PM
Lol. So cute Caren.
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October 12, 2023 at 6:23 PM
I always find a piece of art I like and write about it
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