Crow

crow beak up to eyes in newly planted spring corn... reduced fall harvest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 12:48:00 PM

Sara, good afternoon,,, stopping by to say hi, and to read your clever haiku.... but, them crows can ruin harvest... right! enjoyed...pd

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2012 3:12:00 PM

sure is a greedy one Sara, we here in the uk can only blame the weather for reduced harvest.. awesome poem...

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/19/2012 2:07:00 PM

Mr. Crow, indeed, gets his fair share! :) Cute haiku !

Farida Akhtar

Date: 10/19/2012 1:00:00 PM

An excellent Haiku -artfully composed. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem Love and for welcoming me to poetrysoup. - Farida

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/19/2012 11:32:00 AM

This is such a fact my friend! I really enjoyed this cleverly written masterful poem! You've illustrated the crow perfectly and what it does to the crop! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/19/2012 8:51:00 AM

Sara - This is one of the most charming Haiku I've ever read. love, Kathy

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/19/2012 8:48:00 AM

Very witty. One crow does not eat much, but all his friends do.