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Crouching Cat

crouching down in the grass she felt like a puma or at least a tiger the grass barely moved she was careful not to breathe a rabbit went past. too big to take. She let it live She was waiting for a chipmunk She had spotted him yesterday He was overconfident she could hardly wait to bite off his head

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Date: 6/2/2022 3:07:00 PM
The Cat is a Lonely Hunter....and the chipmunk probably watches too much Chip and Dale
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/2/2022 10:24:00 PM
Sure; if he has a TV set from the 60's. Snicker.Snicker.
Date: 6/2/2022 11:05:00 AM
Boy, you've certainly nailed this hunter. I often see the feral cats stalking my squirrels. They are mostly too slow to catch one, though.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/2/2022 10:24:00 PM
I have had some mighty fast cats.
Date: 6/2/2022 10:59:00 AM
Hello Caren, that last line of your poem made me say Yuck! Hugs. Do they really bite the heads off the chipmunks? Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2022 3:45:00 AM
Hello Caren, cats takes the heads off baby bunnies! Chipmunks to?! My cat is an indoor cat. I will not let her out. Hugs.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/2/2022 10:25:00 PM
Yes and I have seen them do it to baby bunnies too.
Date: 6/2/2022 8:51:00 AM
I can picture this from your vivid writing Caren. Well done ,:)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/2/2022 10:25:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.

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