Crossroads

‘’ ‘ ‘ ‘’’ ‘’’’’ Like a lady-in-waiting in rags of night questions divide wrong from right, ripping faded threads without seams as daybreak continues its beams, its beams Again, yearning to taste the thrill of dawn clay feet slowly loitering, dawdling on for crystalline wishes that did not come to pass dazed eyes are now compelled to plead, to ask Was such existence just a dance of mixed fantasy? a fool’s waltz of pungent deceit and treachery a wrenching flood of wasted years cloaked in love masks and bloodshot tears And she hides behind aged trees and edgily slips While salt of pain pressed on Calvary’s lips, an echo strains she may be cherished still that only the cross of doubt haunts her will More shadows loom upon hills rancid green is this a tale of truth or lie, her twilight unseen? she breathes to touch stretched hours of time oh, will she leave or stay; tossing a dime, a dime © ‘ ‘’’’’ ‘ ‘ Contest: Debbie Guzzi’s Tell Me a Story By: nette onclaud
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:06:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, my friend. Loved and enjoyed your nice one. bl
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:14:00 AM
She will stay? Yes? Shadows are more lilac hued these days, though some are long and mysterious, others near sparkle and are speckled with serendipity. She is very cherished. Glad to see this won. Must be off. Girl about to return home after a daddy/daughter play date and mommy play time is over til late tonight. Cheers, hugs and this is fantastic.. especially liked the last two lines. Hugs, chum!
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations on you win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:29:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning entry Nette. Well written
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:28:00 PM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON HM FOR THIS AMAZING STORY .. ALWAYS A WINNER TO ME ...MY FRIEND
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Date: 1/8/2012 2:36:00 PM
I think you have put a lot into a really good write Nette,, here's wishing you well in Debbie's contest..
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Date: 1/7/2012 6:07:00 PM
awesome sweet NETTE luv.. have so missed words of creativity from u my dear friend... good luck in contest.. thankxx for 4th place for Personification of Jan. with Shivers.. means so much.. please e mail me at: petitepoetess@yahoo.com to chat..
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:27:00 AM
An amazing story you have penned here Nette.Enjoyed very much.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 1/5/2012 5:31:00 AM
Wonderful story nette, enjoyed this ever so much. harry
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:38:00 AM
Great story. I like your lady in waiting better than mine. Beautiful.
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:22:00 AM
sweet write no doubt..loved it, jag
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Date: 1/4/2012 11:44:00 PM
Interesting one on this lady in waiting, Nette. Great ending! gosh, I think you are gonna have to get busy right away on reading your emails. haha. Luv ya, Andrea
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:00:00 PM
Really nice one, enjoyed. Loved "that only.....her will". wonderfully worded, my friend. Best wishes for the contest. bl
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