Crossroads

He closed his eyes to cast away
the peril of his new found truth.
From the greyness within he beholds
the clouds mischievously rolling by,
in the gloom he espies a lonely man
consumed in the confusion that initiates
the conflict between his celestial light,
and the obscurity of life’s abyss.
This mortal, now shackled to the
perpetual script called destiny,
which way his sanity to take him
he really does not know!

Epilogue

Gentle voice sedates me
Surgeon’s choice to set me free
anticipation within the room
participation in sunlight or gloom.

© Harry J Horsman  2010


“Dressing removed, life approved
in glorious living colour!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/16/2012 11:29:00 PM
WOW, this is a GREAT one for me to come upon too!! And I see it was entered into John Heck's Edge contest .sorry if it never won. I don't see any congrats underneath. This is something close to your heart and that comes out in the writing, Harry. By the way, thanks for your very kind comments today.
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:26:00 PM
It is such a joy to finally find a poem of yours to read. hahaha. click click clicking and I am able to find one now. Let me give it a read!!
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:07:00 PM
It is a scarey surgury, Harry. It is understandable how your thoughts were writing an unknown road. So happy things turned out as well as your poem. God Bless, Cile Thank you for your kind words on my poem
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:40:00 AM
This is an excellent poem regarding hanging off the edge. I like the essence of the piece and the story line. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/23/2010 7:17:00 AM
You must truly have been on the "edge" undergoing this surgery, Harry. I can't imagine life without the ability to see and am so happy your surgery allowed you to continue experiencing life "in glorious living colour!" Great entry for John's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2010 6:58:00 AM
Well written, Harry, and glad that you did not loose your eye sight!!! Wish you best of luck for the contest and thank you for your kind comments!...Gert
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:37:00 AM
Nice expressions on the surgery of eye. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/23/2010 3:19:00 AM
Excellent submission for the contest, best wishes. I hope you continue to heal, stay away from the edge.
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Date: 6/23/2010 2:07:00 AM
Glad that the operation was a success...Happy seeing..Sara
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