Crossroads

Many years ago I stood at a 
                               place of crossroads. I was so  
                               young, so inexperienced and 
                               so lacking in knowledge. Yes,
                               much I'd learned, but had the
                               the sources of my instruction
                               been totally correct? In youth
                               I had thought so, but today I  
                               think back to that critical time. 
       I could have gone left or I could have gone right. I made a choice.   
       I walked on some more and faced another pair of crossroads which
       would also have led me again down completely different pathways. 
                              I wonder sometimes if I'd ever 
                              have become a poet. I wonder
                              if I'd have stayed married to a
                              different partner or if I'd have
                              had two similar children. Would
                              opposite experiences have made
                              me very different? Would trials
                              have been different too? Some
                              of my physical trials would be
                              the same no doubt, but would
                              different circumstances cause
                              different reactions? I consider
                              the idea of parallel universes.
                              It fascinates me! Then again,
                              God alone knows the answers
                              to the things I consider. Along
                              life's road I continue, knowing
                              in the end, I will return to Him. 


              Sept. 26, 2021 for the Crossroads Contest of Kim Rodrigues
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Kauffman Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Eloquent ruminations Andrea. Your poem so speaks to the questions all of us ask about our crossroads! A very healing poem. Congratulations on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
Peck Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 4:19 PM
Congratulations on a trophy win! It's written beautifully. Which path we chose or should have chosen is an unanswered question. Good things happen along rock-filled paths. Would we choose differently now if we had to give up the good things? Take care.
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Many questions in life. Have a blessed autumn day ...................
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 6:31 AM
I love your thoughts poetically posted here. Thoughts of alternative routes, parallel universes…would we have the same children…would alternate circumstances lead elsewhere. We contemplate… Congratulations, Andrea!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Beautiful Andrea. It's an amazing quest we're on, and, yes, back to our Creator, the only One who knows for sure our outcomes. God bless you and CONGRATS. Love, Gina
Proxenos Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 12:32 PM
WOW Andrea, circumstances, events, situations, results, meetings - all have a meaning in molding us - but at the end of the day when we follow the road that leads to God, we can only win. . This is definitely a top contender in the contest you entered. Love Jenny.
Romios Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Choices hit us everyday,I do not look back. I live in the now. As you know, it isi sane. I’d love Togo back to my past, bit the AST is yesterday’s newspaper and it’s gone Like you, I made significant decisions. The now, the future counts even more, I liked the shape form for this one..Pangie
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 4:44 AM
Yes, we can think back and wonder what would it have been?? I find it best to only go forward and not look back because we can't change it. Even if we could go back and with the knowledge we have today we don't know what way our life would have unfolded on a different journey. I think God has His children where He can use them even if they might have chosen a path that He would not have wanted them to take. Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 5:08 AM
I can certainly relate to the choices that lead us down roads that define our future. I am very grateful for the paths I took to get where I am today. Your poem makes one contemplate their own choices. Excellent! I hope this garners a win for you. xxoo
Y. Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 6:15 PM
WoW! Andrea, You penned such a deep, thought-provoking write. I can relate to this well-written write a lot. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest- Alexis
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September 27, 2021 at 10:07 PM
A poem that made me think of my own choices, making me wonder if I also thought along these lines. " I wonder sometimes if I'd ever have become a poet. I wonder if I'd have stayed married to a different partner or if I'd have had two similar children. "The typing of this was interesting and not easy. Bravo for the poem and the choreographed typing.
Brul Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 9:28 PM
So very true. As we take our journeys…we only change routes, but destination is always same. Excellent write!
Jayasankar Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Yes, we often think what would have we become if we had taken a different decision and chosen a different path in our lives... Loved reading your thoughts for this contest ... Am sure you would have become a GREAT poetess...whichever path you happened to choose... my Ashwin often talks about parallel universe, etc, which I never understand.. Lol... Hugs... ~ Ani
Gar Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Curving thoughts. When younger then older. Hope your Crossroads bought to you to be a poet and most important returning to God.
Horsman Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 6:56 AM
Love the spiritual aspect to this lovely poetry.
Horne Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 4:55 AM
love this thoughtful write, my friend
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 1:27 AM
As we go through lives we often wonder did we choose the right path, I believe you did Andrea. Tom
Strand Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 1:25 AM
Yes,He knows you Andrea,always
Skelly Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 12:53 AM
It's no good second-guessing ourselves and wondering what if? That way lies confusion. We need to be confident in life...Delice
Brewer Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 7:17 PM
As Jan says: the choices we make determined the people we are today. But who knows? Perhaps we will get a replay! Thoughtful lines as always, Andrea.
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 2:46 PM
I think you have definitely taken the right track Andrea, we can wonder what if... but the choices we make make us the people we are today:-) hugs Jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 12:54 PM
You had a choice and became the number one of the soup. Remember those directions. Hugs.
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