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On Tuesday my mum was diagnosed with Covid so I guess the theme was a natural choice for me - there is a degree of poetic licence - I have  been double vaxxed and will have the booster if I'm offered it in the future. I take my chance and appreciate the beliefs of others who do not feel the same as i do

 

Crossroads

To take the vaccine
That is the decision
People must make
On Covid nineteen
A choice to decide
by the close of day
I have just reached that crossroads
knowing that the conspiracy theorists
warn people not to have it. Some deny
the existence of Covid, and claim it is no 
worse than just a common cold, but I have
decided I'll receive
the first inoculation
It's an easy decision 
A no-brainer for me
Although inoculated
sadly my poor Mum 
has caught the virus
I can't visit with her
It's so heartbreaking
because she lives in
a facility that I can't
visit as long as there
is a quarantine edict



CROSSROADS Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues
09/26/21

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Sam Kauffman October 18, 2021 at 11:25 AM Oh Jan, I am so sorry to hear about your "mum!" What a heartbreaking situation for you. Both my husband and I have had the vax and had the booster. There is so much controversy around the vaccine. You have captured that perfectly. Congratulations on your timely write! In my prayers. Hugs or elbow bumps!

Sara Kendrick October 18, 2021 at 4:34 AM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. My husband and I were vaccinated with both injections but it was January and February then in August exactly 6 months later that we came down with the malady. It is horrible and no one should allow themselves to get it. I felt I and my husband were close to death but we were not hospitalized. My husband had fluids twice in the doctor's office and antibiotics twice. You do not want it. Our daughters came with masks on and gloved up, etc. They do care Sara Sam Kauffman October 18, 2021 at 11:27 AM Oh Sara! How awful! I am so glad to hear that both you and your husband are doing well now and that both of you got this is horrible disease. Sending you prayers and blessings. Sara Kendrick October 18, 2021 at 4:34 AM I hope your mom got over it and I hope no one else in your family gets it. Sara

Joanna Daniel October 17, 2021 at 6:25 AM Hi Jan, hope your mom will get well soon:) congratulations on a great write:)

Christuraj Alex October 16, 2021 at 9:05 AM Well designed cross with a great theme and personal background. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues October 16, 2021 at 6:20 AM An apt subject and one close to your heart. You’ve captured the heartache of this pandemic which we all want nailed to a cross. Hope your mom is on her way to recovery, sweet Jan. Congratulations!

Mark Koplin October 4, 2021 at 8:02 AM I hate hearing that sad news. I wish more people would open their eyes to facts instead of fiction. Well done Jan!

Caren Krutsinger October 1, 2021 at 12:11 PM So sad to hear about your Mother. I hope she recovers quickly.

Delice Arleen Skelly September 30, 2021 at 7:28 AM It's painful news Jan, I do hope your Mother will get better soon. It seems if vaccinated the illness will not be so severe. Sincerely hope this is the case. kindest regards...Delice

Connie Marcum Wong September 29, 2021 at 4:39 AM I am so sorry your mom is ill Jan. I hope you are feeling better? My prayers are there for both of you. Blessings xxoo

Arthur Vaso September 28, 2021 at 10:44 PM Very sorry to hear Jan, the vaccine is not 100%, however what saddens me more , if more people understood and got it, then it might not have spread as it has. Of course being educated I got both doses, not so much for me, but to protect those around me. I hope you mum recovers, and I wish more people would think of others, hugs

Arthur Vaso September 28, 2021 at 10:43 PM Very sorry to hear Jan, the vaccine is not 100%, however what saddens me more , if more people understood and got it, then it might not have spread as it has. Of course being educated I got both doses, not so much for me, but to protect those around me. I hope you mum recovers, and I wish more people would think of others, hugs

Sara Kendrick September 28, 2021 at 5:08 AM Sorry to learn of your mom's illness. I can tell you it is worse than any cold that you could ever have even if you have had the vaccinations. I had it as did my husband and grandson who lives with us. My grandson and I had the viral upset stomach plus I had the nasal congestion. I was sick for 21 days with the worst upset stomach I have ever had plus horrible exhaustion, fatigue. Our grandson wasn't sick but about 3 to 5 days but not so for my husband and I . He developed pneumonia. Sara Jan Allison September 28, 2021 at 7:35 AM They say she's doing well, but of course I am not allowed to see her. I accept people's decision not to have the vaccine but some of the propaganda that is spread beggars belief:-( so sorry you and your family have been so badly affected, its a vile illness. hugs Jan xx Sara Kendrick September 28, 2021 at 5:09 AM Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

Alexis Y. September 28, 2021 at 2:02 AM Hi Jan, I'm sorry to hear about your mother; I know it's hard not to be able to visit her. I don't understand how folk can think Covid was a just a common cold. I wish it were; I'm so tired of this dreadful disease. You did a good job with the contest challenge. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis

Christopher Flaherty September 27, 2021 at 3:26 PM As always I say to you Jan. Yes although you do and specialize in humourous poetry better than anyone I know. But to me your best work like this comes when you speak from your heart . Without even trying. Love hugs blessings to you and yours Get well soon Jan Allison September 28, 2021 at 7:32 AM aww thanks Christopher will drop by:-):-):-) hugs Jan xx Christopher Flaherty September 27, 2021 at 5:30 PM Wrote you a poem Jan. To welcome you back. Hugs blessings hope you like it Christopher Flaherty September 27, 2021 at 4:24 PM Yes I think I can and do Jan. But in my limited life experience although I think I can and may well be able to empathize with your situation. I would never wish to presume I have any idea what you are going through or feeling. I only wish you and yours well and a positive speedy recovery. Hugs and blessings Jan Allison September 27, 2021 at 3:37 PM aww thanks Chris this one really did come from the heart, having mum diagnosed with covid was a huge shock as we thought it was contained to 2 other units, still no idea when the home will be covid free its to be reviewed on 30th but so far no more information id available - not even an update to the press has been forthcoming which was 'imminent' on Saturday:-( being treated like mushrooms - you know that saying I'm sure:-( hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose September 27, 2021 at 10:14 AM I am so sorry to hear this Jan, I pray she makes it through this, she knows you love her and I hope she knows its something you dislike to do to keep away, soon you will be together again, this think has to end sooner or later. I will keep you both in my prayers, much love xo Jan Allison September 27, 2021 at 11:07 AM Thanks Vie, it is such a worrying situation xx

Simon Hamill September 26, 2021 at 5:45 PM Hi jan.really sorry for your mother.its everybody's choice.ive had both my jabs.my friends had both and still got covid.but the symptoms wasn't as bad so they must be something working in them.hope your doing ok.take care.simon.:-) Jan Allison September 27, 2021 at 2:00 AM Thanks Simon I agree, we are both double jabbed too, can only hope and pray mum and the other residents pull through, hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 26, 2021 at 12:13 PM Thanks for at least letting the other side speak their mind without ripping into us, Jan. Hugs. Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 12:30 PM Andrea, taking the vaccine is a decision each individual person can make, you know that I accept your decision not to have the jab as you understand mine for taking it. hugs Jan xx

Joseph P. DiMino September 26, 2021 at 12:12 PM That's fine for you. You certainly have the right to your personal choice. Others simply refuse the vaccine, their decisions based on science that applies to them. Absolutely no healthy child needs a mask, nor vaccine. I will say a prayer for your mother. Blessings my friend! Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 12:27 PM Thanks Joe:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta September 26, 2021 at 11:37 AM Your mother has had both shots and still caught the virus? Her centre must be a cluster, so lucky you can not visit her! Best wishes for good health to both of you! Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 11:58 AM yes she's had both shots (as have I ) and thankfully her case seems to be mild, the outbreak started on 11th and now this is the third unit to be affected, its heartbreaking on so many levels:-( hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet September 26, 2021 at 11:31 AM Jan, we all have to make critical choices we believe are best for ourselves, and no one is being judged for their genuine sentiments. I'm worried about you and your mother. Best wishes for the contest, and get well soon. Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 11:55 AM I agree Lassad it is all down to personal choice. I'm finally starting to get better but worry for mum and the other residents:-( hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins September 26, 2021 at 10:54 AM Jan, I read your poem twice. I am deeply concerned for your mom...and you. We all have to make the decisions we feel are best for us, and no one should be put down for their sincere feelings. But, it does present a crossroads in our thinking. Best for you in the contest, and GET WELL SOON! Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 11:07 AM I'm susceptible to these type of chest infections and that was one of my major reasons for having the vaccine and also my hubby is vulnerable because of his health issues, mum was double jabbed and I'm hoping she will remain with mild symptoms. It is such a worry. I accept those who don't get the jab and hope they understand my decision but the conspiracy theories get more milder by the day:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds September 26, 2021 at 9:41 AM So sorry to hear your mom is ill with covid Jan, I do hope she gets better soon, and you too with that chest infection. The shape poem is perfect for Kim’s contest… All the best, hugs Belle xx Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 10:04 AM Thanks Belle I've not been around much, not had the concentration but today i felt like writing again. I'm not surprised my muse is resting with me i've been ill for over an week and of course am worried about mum and the other residents, hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin September 26, 2021 at 9:13 AM Jan, a powerful poem, so sorry to hear about your Mom, praying for a speedy recovery! hugs Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 10:26 AM Ive you an e mail but its been returned unable to be delivered so re sent it as a soupie xx Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 9:23 AM Thanks Tania. I'm laid low with a chest infection but its nothing compared to the situation in mum's home. I am so worried not only for mum but the other residents and staff on the units:-(hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan September 26, 2021 at 9:07 AM I applaud your statement of appreciating the fact that others may not believe as you do. Now, if only others would be as tolerant as you are. I also admire your view of standing at the crossroads, trying to make the best decision for us as individuals. Well crafted, poem, Jan. Arthur Vaso September 29, 2021 at 12:02 AM Yes and we must respect these views and freedoms, for example, I am a great drunk driver, I have never hurt anyone in my life, I have the right to drive drunk, is my right, why that's illegal in some places really confuses me. Now for some facts, many do take the vaccine, in some places over 90% and oh my, less hospitalizations and deaths. This is not about "us" but about others. People can believe in whatever they want, however what they can not do is impose that belief on others or threaten their safety. I might add is a criminal offense to yell "Fire fire" in a theater when there is no fire. Jan Allison September 26, 2021 at 9:17 AM Thanks for your support with my thoughts Jenna, I know many will not take the vaccine and that is down to personal choice. I've not been around much lately - laid low with a terrible chest infection (I had a covid test which thankfully was negative) I've not been in the home since covid was suspected but it was a complete shock when mum tested positive as her unit wasn't on the same floor as the other cases, its heartbreaking on so many levels:-( hugs Jan xx