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Crossing the River

Everyday, I am moving far away from the place crowded with fears; Chased by my own shadows I start walking. I come to the same river; Starring at the flow of the water trying to hold my breath. I do not how long I stand there, before I go back where I started from. Someday, I'll be on the other side of the river Till then I keep walking...

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Date: 7/11/2016 10:44:00 PM
Good start:)
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Aishwarya Jayasuriyan
Date: 7/12/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thank you MadhuPriya :)
Date: 7/7/2016 1:38:00 AM
A J, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Hope you flourish among this community....Luv **SKAT**
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Aishwarya Jayasuriyan
Date: 7/11/2016 3:17:00 PM
SKAT thank you so much for the wonderful note and glad you liked it . Yes it is really great to be part of this community and I am looking forward :)

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