Crossing the Backwoods

anacreontic verse

The path seems clear
before me.  Strolling
before daybreak,
each step becomes
a test for my lack
of concentration.
Up ahead, 
a tangle of vines
forces awareness,
brings blood to my cheek.
Unseen rocks and holes
disturb my gait;
my ankle complains.
I resolve to 
return to this path
with proper tools,
chop the briars,
and move the rocks 
to fill the holes.
Encroaching further
upon nature’s yard,
I am warned by
striking red skies
as sunrise dawns.
Decision is made. 
I will leave this place
untouched by
human hands.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 28, 2016 at 9:29 PM
REASON, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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January 20, 2016 at 12:10 PM
greeat stuff, reason.. sending my big cheers on your win!..huggs
Poteet Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:33 PM
thanks, nette, I appreciate the read and remarks.
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January 20, 2016 at 5:14 AM
How lovely Reason.. enjoyed reading today.. congrats on big win.
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January 29, 2016 at 10:07 PM
Thanks, Dr. Upma, I appreciate the read and good wishes.
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Reason, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat..
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January 19, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Ed's contest.
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January 18, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Congrats Reason, thank you for entering :)
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January 20, 2016 at 7:27 AM
thanks, Ed. Enjoyed the writing of it and appreciate the honorable. Have a great day in the realms of poetry.
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January 14, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Reason A. Poteet, is this your real name? anyhow, your poem brings me to so many scenes in movies where a person is trying to get away from his/her villain.. I like how you put this in your poem.. =`) enjoyed the read ~Olive Eloisa =`)
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January 14, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Last name is real; first is a pseudonym, nick name given me first by my husband. Thanks for the genuine comment, I enjoyed it.
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