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Crossing Over

Foreword: This is one of the first poems I put to paper. A golden pristine morning, breaks across an endless sea of night, And drifting through the burning haze of breathlessness I see a stranded man mirrored in the waters of time Searching for, and to find his heavens shores In the midst of this hellish sea A battle rages tween sanity and sea as the sun blisters the day But alas as the mirror meets the horizon His heaven becomes a reality And he is born into his spirituality Never to thirst again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/18/2016 9:19:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Date: 2/10/2016 11:21:00 PM
such a joy to absorb this amazing piece on awakening, carl... a beauty from one of your first writes... huggs
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Date: 2/10/2016 11:50:00 AM
A beautiful poem, reflecting a spiritual end. Much more than a wonderful mood. Lovely read. Linda
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/10/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Always nice to hear from you. Gonna stay focused now. Blessings Carl
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/10/2016 12:37:00 PM
That's a good plan
Date: 2/10/2016 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful well put write. Peace, Love and Joy.
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/10/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thanks John. Peace to you as well. Blessings Carl
Date: 2/10/2016 7:43:00 AM
Ethereal and beautiful. Well done Carl
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Carl Fraser
Date: 2/10/2016 7:59:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Kelli. I appreciate it greatly. Blessings Carl

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