Crossing Over

Foreword: This is one of the first poems I  put to paper.

A golden pristine morning,
  breaks across an endless sea of night,
 And drifting through the burning haze
 of breathlessness 
I see a stranded man mirrored in the waters of time
Searching for, and to find his heavens shores
In the midst of this hellish sea
A battle rages tween sanity and sea as the sun blisters the day
But alas as the mirror meets the horizon
His heaven becomes a reality
And he is born into his spirituality
Never to thirst again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:19 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
Onclaud Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 11:21 PM
such a joy to absorb this amazing piece on awakening, carl... a beauty from one of your first writes... huggs
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 11:50 AM
A beautiful poem, reflecting a spiritual end. Much more than a wonderful mood. Lovely read. Linda
Fraser Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Thank you my friend. Always nice to hear from you. Gonna stay focused now. Blessings Carl
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:37 PM
That's a good plan
Hardison Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Beautiful well put write. Peace, Love and Joy.
Fraser Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Thanks John. Peace to you as well. Blessings Carl
White Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Ethereal and beautiful. Well done Carl
Fraser Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Thank you for stopping by Kelli. I appreciate it greatly. Blessings Carl
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