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Crossing Lines

vroom…vroom Toot-toot near miss stay tuned I say highways are not not hard takes a Bard to park this poem vroom…vroom make room I’m here to stay not ruin someone else’s poem near miss stay tuned takes a Bard to take a part in this traffic easy go when it’s light but when it’s heavy write…right…write…left crossing lines make sure they’re not double seeing reality toot-toot vroom-vroom have to cross the line so I don’t hit the accident don’t do a bang up job back at it write right write left beep beep back home lay back pop up watch show

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Date: 6/21/2025 8:27:00 AM
I love country side drive: no rush nor noisy, natural sights. Yet, sometimes, one has to go to a big city. Have a nice day ~ AA
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Date: 6/21/2025 7:19:00 AM
Very different, quite unique, you are here there and everywhere, but I liked it lots, I enjoy poems that confuse me somewhat, and this one leaves me wondering where we both are, the poet and the reader! Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/20/2025 9:44:00 PM
This is cute, love it. It says so much even though it feels like stream of consciousness. Hugs :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2025 7:06:00 AM
Thank you…thank you! In and out of consciousness, one might say ;) Hugs, Paige!
Date: 6/20/2025 7:06:00 PM
Interesting and intriguing poetry, Kim. I like it! A poet friend in Texas, Bill a.k.a. Cowboy Tex ... just Tex for short
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2025 7:27:00 PM
Hello Bill, I heard you and Sara are back! Thank you :)

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