Crossing Lines

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Crossing Lines

You ruinous rascal
Just a rat in the pack
You forced me to sell
now I just want it back

Calamity came
You had the highest bid
Simon’s sister Sydney 
liked what you did

You think you’re the winner
She’s bouncing on your lap
Smug with contentment 
as you tip your cap

A rollercoaster is coming
You’ll plummet from the top
Shattering successful illusion 
your status will drop

A ring is a circle
it will come back to me
The curse you purchased 
I’ll get back for free.

It was no bargain
It tainted her skin
Sapped away her beauty 
You watched her grow thin

Five hundred years
precious so divine 
Not meant for another
only one family line.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/23/2025 5:02:00 AM
Richard, I'm reading this and wondering how fate affects our lives. Indeed there's a lot that happens which we have no control over. The sentiments here are interesting in that there seems to be some glee in someone's misfortune and envy in their smart decisions. Hard to know how things will work out...what seems great now could be our undoing. You've got me thinking now!!! Smiles!!
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Date: 12/28/2024 8:54:00 PM
Yor poetry is a gift to all of us, Richard...Jest penned a question-ku, myself -- one of your creations, if I'm not mistaken. Happy 2025 to you ~ Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2024 6:40:00 AM
You are kind Gershon. Blessing to you and yours.
Date: 12/18/2024 8:38:00 PM
Lines from the heart.We come accross more or less similiar events in our lives.Very nicely penned.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2024 8:33:00 AM
Much appreciated.
Date: 12/18/2024 3:24:00 AM
A wonderful take on the contest, Richard:) unique idea:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2024 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Joanna.
Date: 12/16/2024 6:36:00 PM
...she better watch her back - an interesting read :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2024 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Paige.
Date: 12/13/2024 4:33:00 PM
You made a good point. Your poem is immensely enjoyed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2024 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Hilda.
Date: 12/13/2024 11:06:00 AM
Hi Richard.....l really enjoyed reading this poem... lt is so intriguing as l don't really know who it's about ....worded beautifully! Debx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2024 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Deb.
Date: 12/10/2024 11:42:00 PM
So good to read you here on the Soup, Rick. Thanks for coming back. This poem packs a punch. Sydney lived to regret it. That rollercoaster of karma will get you!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2024 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Eileen. Still not here that much, just occasionally.
Date: 12/8/2024 10:38:00 AM
Your poem effectively uses sharp imagery and rhythmic structure to convey themes of betrayal, revenge, and cosmic justice.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/8/2024 1:56:00 PM
Much appreciated.
Date: 12/8/2024 8:28:00 AM
I always enjoying reading your pieces rich. This particular piece is awesomely composed.. Regards
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/8/2024 1:56:00 PM
You are kind. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 12/7/2024 4:15:00 PM
Good to see you posting again Rick. Someone outbid on a precious family heirloom? It happens
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2024 9:22:00 PM
Hi Tom. Thanks for the visit and sense of humour.
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