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Crossing Lines

Crossing Lines

You ruinous rascal
Just a rat in the pack
You forced me to sell
now I just want it back

Calamity came
You had the highest bid
Simon’s sister Sydney 
liked what you did

You think you’re the winner
She’s bouncing on your lap
Smug with contentment 
as you tip your cap

A rollercoaster is coming
You’ll plummet from the top
Shattering successful illusion 
your status will drop

A ring is a circle
it will come back to me
The curse you purchased 
I’ll get back for free.

It was no bargain
It tainted her skin
Sapped away her beauty 
You watched her grow thin

Five hundred years
precious so divine 
Not meant for another
only one family line.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 5:02 AM
Richard, I'm reading this and wondering how fate affects our lives. Indeed there's a lot that happens which we have no control over. The sentiments here are interesting in that there seems to be some glee in someone's misfortune and envy in their smart decisions. Hard to know how things will work out...what seems great now could be our undoing. You've got me thinking now!!! Smiles!!
Wolf Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 8:54 PM
Yor poetry is a gift to all of us, Richard...Jest penned a question-ku, myself -- one of your creations, if I'm not mistaken. Happy 2025 to you ~ Gershon
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 6:40 AM
You are kind Gershon. Blessing to you and yours.
Singh Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 8:38 PM
Lines from the heart.We come accross more or less similiar events in our lives.Very nicely penned.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Much appreciated.
Daniel Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 3:24 AM
A wonderful take on the contest, Richard:) unique idea:)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Joanna.
Hind Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 6:36 PM
...she better watch her back - an interesting read :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Paige.
Greenhough Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 4:33 PM
You made a good point. Your poem is immensely enjoyed.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Hilda.
M  Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Hi Richard.....l really enjoyed reading this poem... lt is so intriguing as l don't really know who it's about ....worded beautifully! Debx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Deb.
Manassian Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 11:42 PM
So good to read you here on the Soup, Rick. Thanks for coming back. This poem packs a punch. Sydney lived to regret it. That rollercoaster of karma will get you!!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Eileen. Still not here that much, just occasionally.
One Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 10:38 AM
Your poem effectively uses sharp imagery and rhythmic structure to convey themes of betrayal, revenge, and cosmic justice.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:56 PM
Much appreciated.
Sirikye  Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 8:28 AM
I always enjoying reading your pieces rich. This particular piece is awesomely composed.. Regards
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:56 PM
You are kind. Thanks for your visit.
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