Cross Under the Flag of Peace

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7 syllables heavens number by seven steps

two tercets highlighting the trinity which has the union of two steps

the last single to say the host has sealed the ark of words in crowning the heart of this piece

Before your most Gracious crown bending one knee mercy bows hope forgiving light saviour love tasting from Heavens spring Drinking waters of life lived Under dove wings opening Spirit of you embraces God

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/27/2017 12:05:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful n' outstanding spiritual love piece, that you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Very uplifting n' inspirational.I love it!Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.I truly enjoyed it!smiling.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing! Divine!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent piece!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot more each day that you're doing okay in everything, Liam.I wish you all the very best always!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^