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Crocodile Haiku

Crocs open jaw waits Posing in murky water Statuesque for bait~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 3/25/2009 11:33:00 AM
This is a strong haiku, loved it...Raul
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Date: 2/25/2009 1:12:00 AM
very creative this piece! a nice haiku... ~ Arany
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:50:00 AM
Clever writing Jane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/24/2009 8:23:00 PM
Nice use of this short form. I had to chuckle at the last line. Maybe I'm a bit warped. Anyway, I enjoyed this haiku. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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Date: 2/24/2009 2:54:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku.. love this write very much..great write.
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Date: 2/24/2009 12:30:00 PM
Perfection in the form and the descriptiveness is wonderful all coming together well for this haiku. Michael
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