Crocodile and Dentist

Mr crocodile once had a toothache
 Oh ! because he had eaten lots of chocolates and cakes 
He was in distress 
He wanted a dentist Express
 At last a dentist was found his skin was White and face was round 
So, Dr. William, he was called 
Who was tall and almost bald 
Mr crocodile cried my molar has an ache
 Does my tooth need to break
 Soon dentist took a look and shouted loudly what a pity 
You have a cavity 
You have been eating sweets in fact 
Now your teeth need to be extracted
 Just open your mouth large wide 
And close your eyes tight
 Would you look up at tube light 
Aaaaah !that alright 
Doctor extracted teeth and Bent low 
Mr crocodile shouted oh nooo!
 Now crocodile would not eat sweets longer
 Can you guess why ??
Because his teeth were not at all stronger.

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Date: 5/16/2019 3:04:00 PM
Great fun write Sakshi, really enjoyed this one. Great to see you on here as well as AP, have you been here long? Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 11/17/2018 5:32:00 AM
Hahah.. funny
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Sakshi Das
Date: 11/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
thanks a lot...
Date: 10/19/2018 11:37:00 AM
lol nice story. Had fun reading it.
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Sakshi Das
Date: 10/26/2018 11:45:00 AM
thanks for your visit,Sir
Date: 10/7/2018 10:50:00 PM
you are the amazing poet I have ever seen, keep it up
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Sakshi Das
Date: 10/7/2018 10:53:00 PM
thanks a lot for your valuable comment !!
Date: 10/7/2018 6:25:00 PM
I was worried that Crocodile would TEST his new mouth and good teeth on Dr. William. He must be the BEST pet crocdile. Namasthe aur shanthi AUM (Shalom)
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Sakshi Das
Date: 10/7/2018 10:20:00 PM
Thank you so much For such a pleasing comment!!
Date: 10/6/2018 4:45:00 AM
wow , i m ur big fan u write poetry soo nice, keep writing, u great poet
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Date: 10/6/2018 4:49:00 AM
thank you for your valuable comment...
Date: 9/28/2018 9:52:00 PM
Very sweet
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Sakshi Das
Date: 9/29/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thank u, Sir Thank you so much for your visit & such a chummy comment!
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