Get Your Premium Membership

Crocodile and Dentist

Mr crocodile once had a toothache Oh ! because he had eaten lots of chocolates and cakes He was in distress He wanted a dentist Express At last a dentist was found his skin was White and face was round So, Dr. William, he was called Who was tall and almost bald Mr crocodile cried my molar has an ache Does my tooth need to break Soon dentist took a look and shouted loudly what a pity You have a cavity You have been eating sweets in fact Now your teeth need to be extracted Just open your mouth large wide And close your eyes tight Would you look up at tube light Aaaaah !that alright Doctor extracted teeth and Bent low Mr crocodile shouted oh nooo! Now crocodile would not eat sweets longer Can you guess why ?? Because his teeth were not at all stronger.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/16/2019 3:04:00 PM
Great fun write Sakshi, really enjoyed this one. Great to see you on here as well as AP, have you been here long? Blessings,Gordon
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2018 5:32:00 AM
Hahah.. funny
Login to Reply
Das Avatar
Sakshi Das
Date: 11/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
thanks a lot...
Date: 10/19/2018 11:37:00 AM
lol nice story. Had fun reading it.
Login to Reply
Das Avatar
Sakshi Das
Date: 10/26/2018 11:45:00 AM
thanks for your visit,Sir
Date: 10/7/2018 10:50:00 PM
you are the amazing poet I have ever seen, keep it up
Login to Reply
Das Avatar
Sakshi Das
Date: 10/7/2018 10:53:00 PM
thanks a lot for your valuable comment !!
Date: 10/7/2018 6:25:00 PM
I was worried that Crocodile would TEST his new mouth and good teeth on Dr. William. He must be the BEST pet crocdile. Namasthe aur shanthi AUM (Shalom)
Login to Reply
Das Avatar
Sakshi Das
Date: 10/7/2018 10:20:00 PM
Thank you so much For such a pleasing comment!!
Date: 10/6/2018 4:45:00 AM
wow , i m ur big fan u write poetry soo nice, keep writing, u great poet
Login to Reply
Das Avatar
Sakshi Das
Date: 10/6/2018 4:49:00 AM
thank you for your valuable comment...
Date: 9/28/2018 9:52:00 PM
Very sweet
Login to Reply
Das Avatar
Sakshi Das
Date: 9/29/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thank u, Sir Thank you so much for your visit & such a chummy comment!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things