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Critter Tale

A slim handsome ogre named Vampire, married into a fairytale empire. His elfin wife named Hairy bore him a sharp toothed fairy, That looked like a Hobbit from the shire. Much to the elves’ and Ogres’ chagrin, they bore an impish child again. This time being on a roll, they bore an impish troll, and now all the fantasy creatures are kin! (inspired by Debbie Guzzi's contest)

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Date: 5/18/2011 11:06:00 AM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on you win in the contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 5/8/2011 7:30:00 AM

Ooo a new Adams Family, this time ogres and trolls. Most deserved of it's win in Debbie.s contest Robert, congratulations. Have a lovely Sunday....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 4:57:00 PM

This is a riot, Rob!! You gave me quite a laugh with this adorable limerick. Pleae assure me the "hobbit" was not from Devon Shire. LOL I see congratulations are also in order! Way to go, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2011 4:45:00 AM

A wonderful wind congratulations,,, and who knew fantasy creature stories where funny ... I did enjoy them smiles this morning... Have a sweet day ..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations Robert on your win in Debbie's contest "Fantasy Land". Love, Carol

James Foulk

Date: 5/4/2011 12:20:00 PM

a great a creative piece of fine work.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Debbie, Robert

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/4/2011 5:56:00 AM

Very clever and witty piece, Robert! Makes me feel smiley...thank you! Congratulations and so happy you shared this charming write! Best wishes, Mikki P.S. thank you for your kind comment. That was a super long write to trudge through.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2011 11:10:00 PM

Glad to see this one and also that you got a win, Robert. Congratulations!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2011 10:19:00 PM

a jolly write for sure, robert.. big cheers for the happy win! :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/3/2011 8:59:00 PM

Hehe imagine that.. You get to make them family just because you can ;) you made me laugh very early in the morning Robert, that's good trust me ;) love Wilma

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/3/2011 6:00:00 PM

Really cute story. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/3/2011 4:53:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this very creative work..Wild idea..Reads like a winner..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/3/2011 3:27:00 PM

love it