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Critter Power

Forget all you’ve heard about horsepower

Hamsters can take you six miles per hour

  Running a wheel neath the hood

  No oil needed, all is good

These critters can snooze during rush hour




An entry for the Eco-Friendly Vehicles contest

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/13/2011 7:55:00 AM

Wow, what a write Diane! Yes you're right, hansters ware the choice !!!! So funny your Limerick!...All the best for the contest, Gert

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/6/2011 4:58:00 AM

Yours are one of the best I have seen Diane, I just love where you took this write of yours.. :) All the best for the contest, love Wilma

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 5/29/2011 4:44:00 AM

Dear Diane, What a good idea here ! :) Save money on gas too...Soon I'll get a car like Fred Flintstone' s and and use my own two legs to move it...:) Thanks for your funny comment on my blog :) Love, iolanda

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/27/2011 9:06:00 PM

cool entry... why not? And can sell the droppings for organic fertilizer? About your last comment. Don't have to think about it. been there done that... happens when anybody doesn't want to hear what you are saying. It's just a people thing. Good luck Diane

Date: 5/27/2011 2:07:00 PM

Got a good chuckle out of this one. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/27/2011 4:54:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today Diane. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol