Critter Alarm Tanka

carried them away
gripped ...... between her teeth was how
she has moved her cubs.....
safer place..... away from harm.....
she knows....when danger lurks near

nose sniffing the air ...
the scent of a male is close.....
he will kill the cubs ......
so he can have his wicked way ...
even if they are his own....

She hides them away ....
not a whimper must they make .....
 or .....they will be found ....
the lioness breathes deeply ....
willing to die to save them ....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 2:09 PM
So glad to see this remarkable poem winning in the contest. Congratulations! Best wishes, carolyn
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:08 PM
Mother love at its most high. congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 6:52 PM
I'm so glad this one won, seren. I do remember it!! Congratulations. Are you feeling well? Wondering about your health.
Mehta Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:15 AM
A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, seren
A. Sharma Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 2:11 AM
Awesome write on mothers love n fears ! Splendid ! Congrats on great win Seren!
A   Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 1:49 AM
Seren, awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA
Devonshire Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 11:13 AM
Dear Seren, I didn't know that the cubs' fathers would kill their own offspring. What a compelling and somewhat heartbreaking poem. You made the reader "feel" and that is the best a poet can hope to achieve. Love, carolyn
Roberts Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Thanks for stopping by Carolyn, glad you enjoyed my poem....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 11:32 AM
those mamas have such a great instinct for protecting their young. Nice series in the critter contest, Seren. I hope you are feeling well.
Roberts Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 7:20 PM
I am well thanks Andrea, thanks for your kind words ...Seren
Callus Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Very good write Seren; enjoyable and strongly expressed. gl in contest. // paul
Roberts Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 7:19 PM
Thank you Paul for stopping by....Seren
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