Critics Twist the Knife in - Deep

     Golly, gee willikers, gee whiz
     My punch lines have lost all their fizz ~
       Where has that fizz gone
       It’s missing since dawn ~
         Critics say: ‘Tis what ‘tis what ‘tis
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Mckeithan Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 2:17 PM
LOL. I dont think you have lost it yet Gershon
M  Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 3:48 PM
Gee whiz you still have that Fizz BB....fun poem! Haven't heard gee willikers in quite a few years ha!! Debx
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 4:19 PM
Happy Fizzies Party, Deb. ~ Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 10:17 AM
A quick battery charge will get you back up and running Gershon. Tom
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 5:51 PM
Too bad I run on electricity these days. No charging stations in sight. Hmmmm.
Proxenos Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 6:05 AM
Hi Gershon Gee whiz - punchlines are you, they have loads of fizz, let critics say tis what tis. Blessings, Jennifer
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 5:49 PM
Very nice chimey-rhymey there, Jennifer. Smiles, Gershon
Lawless Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 5:13 AM
just keep punchin' Gershon...ya gotta land one now and then...
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2025 at 5:54 PM
Speaking of 'punch:' Punch one for the candidate of your choice. Ponch one for the candidate of our choice. ~ Big Brother
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