Criss-Cross

Criss-cross, what a loss
                         "Their baby girl is dead" the devil gladly said.
                     Oh god what a shame, but, ask me, who's to blame?
                                Another knife, yet another life.
                But what's a little blood to a thousand pounds of soil.
                       What's a little cut, to an entire jar of scars.
                   Her story, pain, and blade quickly start to fade.
   
And as we pause we ask "Come to think of it...

                          ...Are we sure she was really even here, that girl who disappeared?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/21/2015 10:15:00 PM
I LIKE THIS AND SO CREATIVE. " What's a little cut, to an entire jar of scars." ^^^^^ PURE GOLD!! A7
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Trinity Biles
Date: 10/6/2015 9:03:00 AM
Wow thanks so very much!! -TJ
Date: 3/7/2015 10:12:00 AM
Deep and dark...but nice writing....congratulations on a nice win...well done...really enjoyed...
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Date: 3/8/2015 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :) -TJ
Date: 2/21/2015 10:13:00 AM
Just think of it...Enjoyed your poem of different taste...God bless Trinity>>>>rajat
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Date: 2/24/2015 5:42:00 PM
Thanks bunches for the love. -TJ
Date: 2/19/2015 6:02:00 PM
Trinity, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
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Trinity Biles
Date: 2/19/2015 7:55:00 PM
THANK YOU!!! I'm kinda surprised.... it feels great!!
Date: 2/19/2015 1:36:00 PM
deep and sad write congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 2/19/2015 7:54:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! Lots of love!!! <3 -TJ
Date: 2/19/2015 9:32:00 AM
Hi Trinity, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "This Very Moment" if you'd like. Wishing you a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 2/19/2015 7:54:00 PM
OMGOMGOMGOMG! I'm so greatful! Thank you so much for the opportunity!!! Love always Linda!! -TJ
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