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Lack Wanting Needing more But getting less Pray Heaven help us out this fiscal mess Unplanned suddenly most costly demands Poorest people With palmed hands Hunger Grows Growls And moans For more life As it consumes The simple happiness of humble homes 7/16/16 Triple Tetractys 2

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Date: 7/25/2016 3:00:00 PM
Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/25/2016 4:13:00 PM
Thanks, Sara
Date: 7/22/2016 6:01:00 PM
Congrats for your win, Janis. Keep up the good work with new forms!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/25/2016 4:12:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 7/17/2016 4:45:00 PM
A strong write in this form. I bet it does very well!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/17/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thanks....but the pleasure is always in the composing of new forms.
Date: 7/17/2016 9:30:00 AM
Very powerful write, Janis. Much said in your well-written triple Tetractys. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 7/17/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. I enjoy writing these...
Date: 7/17/2016 6:01:00 AM
Truth in beauty ... the theme and the poem ... Great ...
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/17/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thanks, Probir.....truth sounds a little better when we try to beautify it....

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