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Crimson Sparks

The lilac laced cup Smile travels towards a laugh A tale looking up Warmth in the first sip Shadows from your joy and grief At play in your lips Shadows dim and dark Flies into fog a skylark Still the crimson sparks _____________________________________ 22/12/2016

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Date: 12/22/2016 11:01:00 PM
lots of tea to enjoy out of the lace cup :) love the senryu, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 12/22/2016 1:16:00 PM
lovely ending for this greeat senryu, probir.. huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/22/2016 10:20:00 PM
Thank you ... You are not only a great poet but a great connoisseur of poems too ...
Date: 12/22/2016 10:34:00 AM
This is so nice to read today Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/22/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 12/22/2016 5:51:00 AM
What a delight to read all these marvels of your dear, Probir! A seven for each!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/22/2016 10:22:00 PM
Your delight is my ecstasy ... thank you ...

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