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Crimson Rose

CRIMSON ROSE You stand once more beside the harbour wall This is the third night I have seen you there. I watch you from a distance, proud and tall A shaft of sunlight glinting in your hair What is it draws you to that spot each day? What thoughts of sadness occupy your mind? The memory of a love far, far away, A yearning for your homeland left behind? Sad seagulls’ cries provide the only sound; You reach out, casting something on the sea And then, oblivious to all around, You slip away still steeped in mystery I look down where the water gently flows. It’s empty save for one dark, crimson rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/20/2020 5:00:00 PM
Sad, mysterious, wistful, with a nice build of curiosity towards the final couplet. This is a gorgeous sonnet, Bryn - flawless in tone, rhyme, and cadence. A fav for me ~ John
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Date: 7/7/2019 1:39:00 PM
Hello Bryn Strudwuck, I sense that the rose likes to be in the water. I love roses. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/7/2019 12:29:00 PM
Bryn, Brilliant Sonnet with a worthwhile message. Your words flow so well in this poem. ,Well done. -Richard
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:14:00 AM
Congrats, Bryn. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/8/2018 6:54:00 PM
Oh my! I want more... Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 8/5/2018 9:28:00 PM
A gripping read. Congratz on winner.
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Date: 8/5/2018 6:47:00 PM
Bryn, this is just beautiful. Congratulations on your win !Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/5/2018 6:13:00 PM
Bryn, the romance drips off this beautifully
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Date: 8/5/2018 5:39:00 PM
This lovely piece has the makings of a dramatic romantic movie Bryn. I didn't want it to end...but end it you did, splendidly! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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