Crimson Rose

CRIMSON ROSE

You stand once more beside the harbour wall
This is the third night I have seen you there.
I watch you from a distance, proud and tall
A shaft of sunlight glinting in your hair
What is it draws you to that spot each day?
What thoughts of sadness occupy your mind?
The memory of a love far, far away,
A yearning for your homeland left behind?
Sad seagulls’ cries provide the only sound;
You reach out, casting something on the sea
And then, oblivious to all around,
You slip away still steeped in mystery
      I look down where the water gently flows.
      It’s empty save for one dark, crimson rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Watt Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 5:00 PM
Sad, mysterious, wistful, with a nice build of curiosity towards the final couplet. This is a gorgeous sonnet, Bryn - flawless in tone, rhyme, and cadence. A fav for me ~ John
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 1:39 PM
Hello Bryn Strudwuck, I sense that the rose likes to be in the water. I love roses. have a nice day my friend.
Theraven Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Bryn, Brilliant Sonnet with a worthwhile message. Your words flow so well in this poem. ,Well done. -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Congrats, Bryn. Beautiful.
Gentry Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Oh my! I want more... Congratulations on your win. :)
Waters Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 9:28 PM
A gripping read. Congratz on winner.
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Bryn, this is just beautiful. Congratulations on your win !Hugs Eve
Cornish Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Bryn, the romance drips off this beautifully
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 5:39 PM
This lovely piece has the makings of a dramatic romantic movie Bryn. I didn't want it to end...but end it you did, splendidly! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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