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Crimson Falling

leaves of Autumn’s ease descend with delicate grace- r a v i s h i n g crimson Date written: March 15, 2019 Contest: Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Warren Doll

Date: 3/18/2019 8:34:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Love the last line. Congratulations on your win. Best Wishes~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2019 11:07:00 PM

Nicely done Luloo! Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! Happy St. Patrick's Day! xxoo

Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2019 5:27:00 AM

xoxo too! thank you lovely Connie :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2019 6:54:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2019 5:27:00 AM

thanks again sweet lady! :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2019 6:38:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Laura, great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2019 5:27:00 AM

you too! thanks lovely lady :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 6:24:00 PM

beautiful formatting, Laura Loo. Love the assonance in line one. Congrats for your win.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2019 5:26:00 AM

many thanks sweet Andrea :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 2:59:00 PM

- A great autumn picture, L.L. :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2019 5:26:00 AM

thank you lovely Sunshine :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2019 7:27:00 AM

pretty autumnal imagery LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2019 5:26:00 AM

many thanks sweet Jan :)-luloo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/15/2019 7:21:00 AM

What a magnificent tribute to fall, my second favorite season! Great imagery, Lu.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2019 5:26:00 AM

my fave season ever! thank you lovely lady :)-luloo