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Crimson

oak leaves fluttering brilliant autumnal colors . . . crimson dusk fall - ing Aug 23, 2020 for Brian Strand's Completely Your Choice Any Form Any Theme Poetry Contest

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/1/2020 7:40:00 PM

Back with congrats on your placement in Brian's contest, Andrea! Blessings and Bounty, Gershon

John Watt

Date: 8/27/2020 1:58:00 PM

Nothing says "autumn" better than fall - ing leaves. Nice wordplay, Andrea.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/26/2020 7:22:00 AM

Ooh. I can just picture those leaves fluttering down or being swept along by the wind against that rich crimson backdrop. Lovely canvas there, Andrea. :) Gershon

Judy Ball

Date: 8/24/2020 12:19:00 PM

Being a nature lover I love this Haiku. Nice job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/24/2020 11:32:00 AM

It's a delightful description of the falling leaves adding "crimson" to dusk, Andrea. A lovely haiku! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/24/2020 3:29:00 AM

So cute... Lovely imagery! Reads like a winner,!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/23/2020 8:05:00 PM

Perfect autumn scene Andrea Tom

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/23/2020 6:34:00 PM

Hi Andrea. A few small words to stop and make me use different parts of my brain. Remarkable how so few words can take me on such a pleasant trip. So, I am working—almost all my creative efforts—on a project to publish by document assembly. Not done yet, but I am hopeful it will be soon. Just starting to gain momentum. When I finish, I hope to direct more time to poetry. You are really a very talented poet, and I hope we can stay in touch. Hope you are well!!