Alexis Y. Poet Quatrain

Crimsom Red

the artist put paint on a blank sheet, 
  a deep crimson red was so concrete.
  which flowed out, a grim work of art,
  can be compared to my bleeding heart.











Contest:QUAT-RO 
Sponsor:Brian Strand
11/17/2020

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John Hamilton December 10, 2020 at 1:34 PM Wow Lexi this is so good, very vivid the imagery, leaves one wondering if the interpretation is right, it's ambiguity is so appealing! Congrats on a top win!

Susan Ashley November 23, 2020 at 6:49 PM A flow of dark emotions spill so elegantly from your creative poignant pen, Alexis. Congratulations, my friend, for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2020 at 4:36 PM Awesome win, Alexis. Congrats, my friend

Sara Kendrick November 19, 2020 at 10:28 AM Congrats on your winner. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara

Anisha Dutta November 19, 2020 at 7:40 AM Big Congrats to win First place. Blssing

Frances Schiavina November 19, 2020 at 7:18 AM Beautiful! Well deserved top win. Congratulations

L. J. Carber November 19, 2020 at 7:10 AM I like this! Quite a bit of power in just 4 lines---congrats Aleixis

Janice Canerdy November 19, 2020 at 6:59 AM Superb, Alexis! A BIG congrats on your win. Janice

Rama Balasubramanian November 19, 2020 at 6:09 AM Great write Alexis. Last line superb. Hope you didn't mean it. Congratulations on your win Rama

Constance La France November 18, 2020 at 6:24 AM Alexis, well done, I love this and it is a FAV for me _ Constance Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:27 AM Hi BW, Thank you so much. I really appreciate you stopping by. Thanks for the fav as well:-)Alexis

Silent One November 18, 2020 at 5:50 AM He painted all his emotions onto a blank canvas... Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:29 AM Hi Silent, Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and leave a comment. I appreciate your continued support:-)Alexis

Victor Buhagiar November 18, 2020 at 3:20 AM One can imagine such a painting. Best for a win. ~~ Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:30 AM Hi Victor, Thank you so much for stopping to share your thoughts. I appreciate your continued support:-)Alexis

Krish Radhakrishna November 18, 2020 at 12:13 AM really like this poem! It is very good! All the best in the contest!! Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:31 AM Hi Krish, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands November 17, 2020 at 4:26 PM I can see this and feel it Alexis. Great one :) Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:32 AM Hi Heidi, I appreciate you stopping by to share your thoughts. Thanks:-) Alexis

Jan Allison November 17, 2020 at 11:05 AM well penned Alexis:-) such sad imagery:-( hugs jan xx Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:33 AM Hi Jan, Thank you so much. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Jessie Jones November 17, 2020 at 10:51 AM a vision :) Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:34 AM Hi Jessie, I appreciate you stopping to share your observation. Welcome to Poetry Soup:-)Alexis

Rico Leffanta November 17, 2020 at 10:44 AM Or it could be Trump Red bleeding the nation dry? Aloha! Rico Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:36 AM Hi Rico, I appreciate you stopping to share your thoughts.I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 17, 2020 at 9:39 AM Outstanding imagery, Alexis! Short ink strokes speaks longer in muse time. Excellent poem, sista. Love and joy always. Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:40 AM Hi Freddie, It’s always good to see on my page. Thanks for stopping by for such an excellent comment. I miss your ink and presence on the soup, my dear friend:-)

Vijay Pandit November 17, 2020 at 9:13 AM Your poem is like a painting, Alexis--so well written! Alexis Y. November 18, 2020 at 10:42 AM Hi Vijay, Thank you so much for being the first to stop and leave such a comment. I appreciate your continued support, my friend:-)Alexis