Crimsom Red

the artist put paint on a blank sheet, a deep crimson red was so concrete. which flowed out, a grim work of art, can be compared to my bleeding heart. Contest:QUAT-RO Sponsor:Brian Strand 11/17/2020

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John Hamilton

Date: 12/10/2020 1:34:00 PM

Wow Lexi this is so good, very vivid the imagery, leaves one wondering if the interpretation is right, it's ambiguity is so appealing! Congrats on a top win!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/23/2020 6:49:00 PM

A flow of dark emotions spill so elegantly from your creative poignant pen, Alexis. Congratulations, my friend, for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2020 4:36:00 PM

Awesome win, Alexis. Congrats, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2020 10:28:00 AM

Congrats on your winner. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/19/2020 7:40:00 AM

Big Congrats to win First place. Blssing

Frances Schiavina

Date: 11/19/2020 7:18:00 AM

Beautiful! Well deserved top win. Congratulations

L. J. Carber

Date: 11/19/2020 7:10:00 AM

I like this! Quite a bit of power in just 4 lines---congrats Aleixis

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/19/2020 6:59:00 AM

Superb, Alexis! A BIG congrats on your win. Janice

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 11/19/2020 6:09:00 AM

Great write Alexis. Last line superb. Hope you didn't mean it. Congratulations on your win Rama

Constance La France

Date: 11/18/2020 6:24:00 AM

Alexis, well done, I love this and it is a FAV for me _ Constance

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:27:00 AM

Hi BW, Thank you so much. I really appreciate you stopping by. Thanks for the fav as well:-)Alexis

Silent One

Date: 11/18/2020 5:50:00 AM

He painted all his emotions onto a blank canvas...

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:29:00 AM

Hi Silent, Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and leave a comment. I appreciate your continued support:-)Alexis

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/18/2020 3:20:00 AM

One can imagine such a painting. Best for a win. ~~

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:30:00 AM

Hi Victor, Thank you so much for stopping to share your thoughts. I appreciate your continued support:-)Alexis

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/18/2020 12:13:00 AM

really like this poem! It is very good! All the best in the contest!!

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:31:00 AM

Hi Krish, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/17/2020 4:26:00 PM

I can see this and feel it Alexis. Great one :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:32:00 AM

Hi Heidi, I appreciate you stopping by to share your thoughts. Thanks:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2020 11:05:00 AM

well penned Alexis:-) such sad imagery:-( hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:33:00 AM

Hi Jan, Thank you so much. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Jessie Jones

Date: 11/17/2020 10:51:00 AM

a vision :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:34:00 AM

Hi Jessie, I appreciate you stopping to share your observation. Welcome to Poetry Soup:-)Alexis

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/17/2020 10:44:00 AM

Or it could be Trump Red bleeding the nation dry? Aloha! Rico

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:36:00 AM

Hi Rico, I appreciate you stopping to share your thoughts.I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/17/2020 9:39:00 AM

Outstanding imagery, Alexis! Short ink strokes speaks longer in muse time. Excellent poem, sista. Love and joy always.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:40:00 AM

Hi Freddie, It’s always good to see on my page. Thanks for stopping by for such an excellent comment. I miss your ink and presence on the soup, my dear friend:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/17/2020 9:13:00 AM

Your poem is like a painting, Alexis--so well written!

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/18/2020 10:42:00 AM

Hi Vijay, Thank you so much for being the first to stop and leave such a comment. I appreciate your continued support, my friend:-)Alexis