Crime: Rape
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It is estimated up to 4000 date rapes occur in Australia per year- that is disgusting and makes most men angry. It was raining and cold outside when I wrote this. Sad.
Red lights in her eyes were slow, full of laze,
Her feet conversed with the black,
As she stepped a vague step into a daze,
Her feet were under attack,
Then she fell to the ground like a petal on dew,
She lay like a rose in a lake,
Still dancing with a colourful blur of a shade,
Like she did when she was awake,
And her blur faded slowly to a comfortable grey,
Her mind faded to a tranquil serene,
Where she drifted along like two lovers in rain,
Two lovers you find in a dream,
And she never found out who stole who she was,
When she was unable to think,
She never found out who planted the seed,
Who spiked her evening drink.
Copyright © Lewis Raynes | Year Posted 2020
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