Crime Pay's

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my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words like gracious,extravaganza,etc… this poem is about crime pays its due in america. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.

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Arturo Michael

Date: 7/2/2020 7:33:00 PM

Certainly crime pays it due...There are some wonderful lines in this write....

Lucifer Very Very Very 1st
Date: 7/6/2020 1:13:00 PM

thank you for the time of day for your review,arturo michael! poet,lucifer very very very 1st

Sand Blown

Date: 7/2/2020 2:22:00 PM

….the u.s. seems such a ramble....and 'that' condition (of its being in a ramble) may quite possibly be a/the fated 'state' in which it is/does pay its dues.....one big f--k up...…stan sand

Lucifer Very Very Very 1st
Date: 7/6/2020 1:11:00 PM

thank you for the time of day for your review,sand blown! poet,lucifer very very very 1st