Bernard Chan Poet Rubai

Crime of Passion

I’ll ransack the caging golden towers,
Slip your hands from the twines of forlorn hours;   
Spirit you to fields ‘neath conspiring stars,     
Coif your hair with a headdress of flowers.

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Susan Ashley April 16, 2019 at 8:06 PM Passionate emotional poetry, Bernard. I was intrigued by the intense spirit and imagery of this piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Bernard Chan April 17, 2019 at 7:09 AM Thank you, Susan! :)

Hibah Shabkhez April 8, 2019 at 3:04 AM Creepy-nice :) Bernard Chan April 8, 2019 at 4:20 AM Yes, the creepiness was intentional. Wanted to try something a little different. Thank you, Hibah :)