Crickets Sing Their Song

crickets sing their song in perfect rhythm, rhyme, pitch.... red sun rises late

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Don Johnson

Date: 10/3/2012 3:50:00 PM

my boss said 'stand on that cricket,' i said 'no, let it live,' id stand up for the underdog, he sacked me didn't forgive, his loss here hey, Don

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/27/2012 10:52:00 PM

A lovely scene comes to mind. Lovely haiku Sara.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/27/2012 6:29:00 PM

Ah this must be the onset of autumn you speak of my friend! I do like the sound of crickets when you have nothing else to do but listen...otherwise they can be irritating! This is a fabulous poem, one at which I enjoyed a lot! Brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2012 6:21:00 PM

Awesome, Sara. Soon you will have enough for a small book of haiku!