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Cricket In My House

Peep PEEP peep peep PEEP I'll go CRAZY This cricket I'm calling him Zainey He PEEP peep peep PEEPS I can't get my sleep My brain's become foggy and hazy!

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/27/2017 4:45:00 PM

I like this limerick...so unique! A fun one!

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 9:36:00 AM

Thanks for your visit Kim!!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2017 11:08:00 AM

what a cute limerick I adore this form Judith and this is great fun:-) hugs jan xx

Judith S
Date: 11/8/2017 4:48:00 AM

Thank you Jan! They are actually kind of fun to write. Appreciate you reading :) Best, Judy

Silent One

Date: 11/6/2017 10:57:00 AM

You are turning into a master with these limericks, one of the hardest things is the meter and you are very good at that! We don't have crickets where we are.. but we do play cricket!

Judith S
Date: 11/8/2017 4:47:00 AM

Thank you SO! You should be glad that there are no crickets! Appreciate you reading and commenting as always. Best, Judy

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/6/2017 3:06:00 AM

Hi Judith, sweet and funny this piece of yours! :D Limerick is not one of my fave poetry form and I congratulate for this! :D thank you for your comment on one of my fave poems in my list.. ! :D I haven't been in the soup for awhile cause am preoccupied with loads of things but tell you what this a great community.. :) Keep writing and always be inspired! :) hugs xx // OLive ELoisa

Judith S
Date: 11/6/2017 7:55:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting Olive Eloisa. I agree with you that limerick is not my favorite form either. But at times, it seems I need a little lightness in my otherwise emotional thoughts :) Thank you so much for your encouraging words! Best, Judy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2017 8:00:00 PM

So funny. Yeah, if one can only hear this dang cricket while trying to sleep, that can be really difficult to deal with. (As an insomniac , I well know)

Judith S
Date: 11/6/2017 7:51:00 AM

Thank you for reading Andrea :) Elusive little devil he is!!! lol Best, Judy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/5/2017 9:32:00 AM

Sound of music in your poem, Judith--well written!

Judith S
Date: 11/5/2017 2:36:00 PM

Vijay ... thanks for reading :) Best, Judy

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/5/2017 8:19:00 AM

A soloist... imagine if the entire orchestra was there... All the best Judith

Judith S
Date: 11/5/2017 2:36:00 PM

Hello Arturo. I loved your comment ... a soloist!! That made me laugh. The whole orchestra can be heard in the spring and summer during the evenings making beautiful symphonies :) Thanks for reading. Best, Judy

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/5/2017 6:33:00 AM

I can only imagine that Judith. I enjoyed your cute, funny poem. Although not so funny for you if you aren't getting sleep! Take care :)

Judith S
Date: 11/5/2017 2:32:00 PM

Thanks for reading Heidi! :) ~ Judy