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Crepuscular Mist

crepuscular mist
rising above the shore’s rocks…
do I see a light?

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 11:05 AM

Congratulations Robert, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 9:50 AM

Hello Robert, Congratulations on your win in the contest. As Always, Shar

John Freeman

February 27, 2011 at 4:18 PM

Great job Robert, good to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems eighth place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2011 at 4:03 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

February 27, 2011 at 1:09 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Bob. Nice going. Ralph.

Kash Poet

February 27, 2011 at 12:06 PM

Very nice interpretation of the contest picture!Congrats Robert on your win in this contest---kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 27, 2011 at 8:38 AM

Congrats on your win with this, Robert and so awesome how you put in such a unique word in your haiku!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 7:41 AM

Congrats Robert on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv... so happy to be sharing the winners list with a great talent as u luv..

Tahera Mannan

February 27, 2011 at 3:18 AM

This visual was a sure winner.many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2011 at 11:33 PM

Hi, Robert. Congratulations. Glad to see your name aong the winners.

Joyce Johnson

February 26, 2011 at 10:03 PM

I guess they're outdated but they did their job, those lights, I have to look up that word. congratuations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

February 26, 2011 at 8:59 PM

Congratulations on your 8th Place Win in my contest, Robert. Thanks for your support. Always, Annalise

Kristina Reid-Hansen

February 23, 2011 at 8:11 AM

I see the moon light=0) Nice!

Doris Culverhouse

February 23, 2011 at 6:15 AM

enjoyed reading your work today!!

Michelle Mac Donald

February 23, 2011 at 5:33 AM

This is lovely, Robert. Good luck in the contest! Mikki

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 23, 2011 at 5:26 AM

Beautiful words Robert for your contest entry.. a pondering sight to view ... good luck my friend with luv..

Virginia Mitchell

February 23, 2011 at 4:48 AM

Thank you for your comment on my Kitty Cat poem. Good luck in the contest: )

Tahera Mannan

February 23, 2011 at 3:14 AM

This is one amazing haiku Robert. What a beautiful title.

Deb Wilson

February 23, 2011 at 12:32 AM

very nice and descriptive ..good luck ..love,Deb

Kash Poet

February 23, 2011 at 12:25 AM

Wonderful Haiku describing the contest photo!Goodluck in the contest----kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2011 at 12:19 AM

aha, now I have seen the light!! (the picture!) You must have been the first entry!

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2011 at 11:43 PM

I remember using that word in a challenge poem once, crepuscular. To this day I sometimes forget its meaning, but i think it has to do with "night time"? Yes, that has to be it. LIke right before night or close to dawn maybe. This is wonderful.

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